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Question: Please tell me what you think of this story Idea!.!.!.!?
Okay, so I am an aspiring author, and I wanted to see what others thought of my story idea!. I have already begun writing the book, and I thought it would be cool to see if anyone would read it!.

My Name is Amy
I am Seventeen years old
My Name is Amy
And, I am a very gifted person

Perspiration gathered on my forehead, and I threw up onto the black pavement!. My kidnapper scrunched his face in disgust and maneuvered around the vomit to pick me up by my bound wrists again!. What's so strange is, he hasn't said one word to me!. Not a single taunt or explanation!. If I am going to die, I should at least know why!.

"What are you," I muttered weakly!. Before he let me finish I was thrown into the flaming black metal!. The scream that hadn't come two minutes ago when the man stole me away from my apartment building burst from my lungs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
the whole thing was very clever !. nice sentence construction!. good job girl :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the last line a lot :]

good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com