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Question: How true is what I wrote!?
his is a message for people who have been living their lives with regrets because of some bad past experience!.I wrote it and would like to know what you think of the writing and the truth (if there's any) that it holds!.Feel free to rewrite it, the way that you would like!.
Muchas gracias



A young heart must liberate itself from the dark relic of its past in order for it to reach the dream that it has always fought for!. Regrets can only hold it in a backward abysmal and make it bitter!.Sadly, a heart that is rotten by bitterness can become a dark nest where hate can grows!.Don't hate your imperfection because hate make us blind and obstruct your judgment!. It is hard to forget our past mistakes but instead of moaning on what has been done, we should ask God for the courage to accept the things that we can change and the wisdom to change what we can!.

If you are not Christian feel free to remove the part that is about GOD or to replace it by something else!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sure it is true!. But it should be broader in scope!. Not only young hearts but older hearts, all hearts should strive for liberation!. God teaches forgiveness of our enemies and if the enemy be thine self, then we should forgive here as well!. also we should ask God for the ability to accept what we can't change as well as what we can change!. Pray for the ability to tell the difference between those two so we don't waste time trying to change something we can't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the last line is meant to be 'Courage to change the things we can, acceptance for the things we cannot and the wisdom to know the difference!.'
I really liked it, you could tighten up the language a bit such as 'hate can grows!.' This does not make much sense it should be either 'hate grows' or 'hate can grow!.'
Anyway, I agree with the gist of it :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com