Would you read a book like this....It's about werewolves.?

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Question:

Characters:
-Nawla( a female werewolf), she's in love with Jonah
-Jonah(a male werewolf) He's in love with Kiara
-Kiara (a female human) Doesn't know there werewolves

Plot summary:
All of Pir (the werewolf packs name) inform Jonah he can not see/date a human because she could find out and tell others about them!. Jonah replies he loves her, and he is going to turn her into one of them!. Upon hearing this Nawla sneaks out of the meeting their holding and goes to find the human(The rest of Pir is to busy trying to decide what to do, they don’t want to have to kill a member of their pack if it can be helped)!. When she finally finds her, she rips Kiara to shreds thinking Jonah will now HAVE to be attracted to her since the human is dead!. Nawla sneaks back into the meeting, and no one every knows she was gone!. Jonah is forced to stay at the packs home for a couple of days (The Pir is trying to figure out what to do) and he finds out Kiara was killed but he thinks it was from a car accident, until Nawla lets it slip that she killed Kiara!. Jonah is outraged and kills Nawla!. He than kills himself, knowing that he would be killed by the pack and he can’t think of being alive with out Kiara!. But really, Kiara is alive and Nawla had killed Kiara’s sister!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, very interesting!. :D

EDIT: But wait!.!.!. Nawla!? Kiara!? Lion King and Lion King two!?!.!.!.But I like them!.

EDIT two: I disagree with Erica, and agree with you Obey Pust!., Kiara being alive would be a twist!. and just because it's a forbidden love doesn't mean it sounds like Twilight!. that book was terrible, and I'm sure you *Obey Pust!.* can write better than her

EDIT again: !.!.If they are supposed to be "their vicious human killing creatures", why did Jonah fall in love with Kiara!? Is he the only exception!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's very Midsummer Night's Dream-ish!. Other than that, I think you have a wonderful idea for a story!. Good luck!

Edit: I agree with Would you Fancy a Lolly! Those names ARE from Lion King!. I suggest changing them!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The plot sounds interesting, but I would not read this book simply because of the grammatical errors throughout the synopsis!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

go for it!
im reading a werewolf/love story at the mo!.!. its very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's good, I like the new names you gave them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmm I could be tempted to read it although I am not a fan of tragic romances!. I like the idea of vicious werewolves!. It seems like werewolves have become such wimps in books lately!.

Edit- Good!. I am sick of werewolves that act like furry superheroes!. Werewolves are suppose to be cruel, vicious monsters, not teddy bears that save you every time you do something stupid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!. its not like all the little happy ending fairy tales, which, while nice, aren't always reality!. it does sound romeo&&juliet-ish but that's okay, it'll be better cause it has werewolves:D && i like that their more vicious then in all the books i hav recently read *cough cough* Twilight series *cough cough*!.

just an idea: you should switch POV between Jonah && Nawla!. she sounds like a pretty evil girl && i think it would be cool to have a peek inside her head!. again, only an idea!.

all in all i'd most likely pick it up if i saw it!.

good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its ok, but as thr answers have said before its not really that unique or original!. there are SO many vampire/werewolf stories now but maybe if you had some kind of weird twist to it that would separate it from everything else like it!. something unexpected, something captivating!. I really dont have any ideas for you but i think you have a good start!. just try to make it a little less of a mixture of twilight and romeo&juliet although they're both wonderful stories, they are already written!

Happy Writing! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com