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Chapter 1
“So, what bike are you gonna get!?” Lauren asked me!.
“I don’t know!. Probably the green Hampton Cruiser!. It’s really cool,” I said!. “Ohmigod! Me too! We are so put together!.” Lauren said excitedly!.
“Yeah,” I faked a smile!. And started to ride away
Lauren Hamilton and Bella Helms!. Everyone insisted that those names totally sounded best friendy!.
I sure didn’t think so!.
Lauren was my best friend from 2nd grade, but over the years I kind of didn’t consider her my best friend!. She did, and so everyone else thought so!. We’re going to be in the high school grade in the fall!.
I thought summer was supposed to be all about fun and the year ahead!. Especially the one when you’re going into high school!. My summer’s totally different!. It’s all about Lauren wanting to do the same things all the time!. She’s totally acting like we’re going into 4th grade!.
I’m going to go insane any second now!. But, whatever, I guess!.
“Bella, where are you going!?” Lauren raced after me!.
“Um, I have to go to my cousin’s I promised I’d help her find cute clothes in Hollister!.” I turned around and smiled!.
“Oh!. Well, when are you gonna be back!? Cuz’ I was thinking we could go in your pool!?” Lauren was trying to make it not sound like she was inviting herself over!.
She thought it worked!. I didn’t!.
“Hmm… uh, probably late!. And then I have to help Paige, um,” I was trying to think of something so she wouldn’t suggest a night swim!. “I have to help her with her summer reading list!. Yeah, summer reading!.” I lied!.
“Oh, I was gonna say a night swim, but-” I cut her off!.
“Sorry,” I rode my bike onto my driveway!.
Bingo!. Night swim!? Told you!.
I wasn’t completely lying!. I really was going to my cousin’s!. Claudia, who was my age, was the one I was going to the mall with!. Then there’s Brittia, who’s 3 years younger than Claudia and I!. And then there’s Emma, who’s just a baby!.
Claudia lives right around the corner so I can ride my bike there!. I made sure Lauren went inside, I grabbed my bag, and then I took off on my bike for Claudia’s!.
I rang the doorbell and my aunt answered!. “Hi, Bella!. Claudia’s upstairs!.
“Okay,” I smiled and ran up to Claudia’s room!.
I practically lived at my cousins because of Lauren!. That totally takes up my time from hanging out with Jason, my best guy friend!. I tell Jason absolutely everything!. Well, not everything, but I tell him a lot!.
“I need new clothes!. I can’t live off these anymore,” Claudia said!.
“Clauds, we’re going to the mall today!. You can buy clothes there!.” I said sarcastically!.
“Bells, I don’t know!. There’s this new kid on our street now… He’s really cute!. We should, like, spy on his family!.” Claudia said playfully!.
“Ha-ha, real funny Clauds!.” I laughed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com