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Question: Can u give numbers of this poem out of 40!?
and explain that how is it!? its my own poem!.


Quest of myself
Wondering alone to find my soul
To know who am I
What is the aspiration of my role
Why my existence is essence
Someone find for me a sip of skoal
The glass of endurance is brimming
And without solace I like to roll
Beyond knowing the endeavor of life

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like your poem!.
A question: Do you mean "Wondering alone!.!.!." or "Wandering alone!.!.!."
Either one works, really!.
Assume you mean the chewing tobacco: "Skoal"!?
Hmm!.

Still like it!.
Is '40' the top score: the best number to give!?
If so, around 38 to 39!.
Only because of small uncertainties!.!.!. but most good poetry leaves a reader a bit uncertain, which makes it applicable to more situations than just one!.

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Your poem is actually good!.!.!.
for me your 34 out of 40!.!.!.
it needs improvement though!.!.!.
make it longer!.!.!.!.but i like it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can tell u that it sounds melancoly
id give it 36 out of 40Www@QuestionHome@Com