And i don't even know if i'm writing it right!.
"Blah blah blah," he said!. I looked at him like!.!.!.!.
or is it:
"Blah blah blah," he said!.
I looked at him like!.!.!.!.!.
!?
But also, a lot of my writing is just people talking and describing what they are doing as they talk or their facial expressions!. I feel like my main character's personality is disappearing because there aren't those long paragraphs about what she thinks or whatever!.
My plot also keeps changing! Anyone know how to help me really organize my thoughts or something!? Is there an excerpt of a really good dialoge scene you can share!? I've tried looking at books i;'ve read tohelp me but i recently let my friend borrow the book i usually use (PEEPS by scott westerfeld)
I'm also pretty bad a describing the scenes and anything that isn't a gesture or movement!. Sooo help there would be nice too!. What else cn I write about besides them speaking to each other!?Www@QuestionHome@Com