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Question: What do you think of the first few chapters of my book!?
This is the first five chapters of a book that I am writing!. It is temporarily called The Violet Eyes (let me know if you have any btter suggestions)!. I am fourteen and absolutely love writing!. My lifelong goal is to get a book published and I am writing this one for practice!.!.!.!.unless it turns out to be really good and I can get it published, that would be so cool!. Anyway, please read it and tell me what you think!. Don't not read it beacuse I'm young therefore it will automatically suck because I think that it's pretty good so far!. If you hate it, please don't be harsh because that's always hard to take!. So!.!.!.!.yeah, tell me what you think and any suggestions you may have about the title!. Thanks! Oh, I apalogize for any spelling or grammar errors in there!. I spell chekced but things always slip through!.!.!.!.
Here it is: http://www!.fictionpress!.com/s/2581604/1/!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i only read the first chapter but it was fantastic!!!
your an excellent writer,
the story idea was awesome and was really interesting

hope you end up publishing it!!!!!

ohhh and October 13th is my birthday lol

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looks good!, i have no problem with it!.

hope you get published, looks promising!.

-ZACKWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. It's goodWww@QuestionHome@Com