iv just written a short story can you please read it and tell me what you think
http://www!.booksie!.com/fantasy/short_sto!.!.!.
also should i keep it a short story or turn it into a novel
i was thinking of making it the start of a novel about a mermaid who's father was going to marry her off to a trident she jhated and murdered her lover so she escaped the ocean and started living on land passing for a human
so the trident she was engaged to sings out to the broken hearted women luring them into the ocean trying to find her and murders all the women that arnt her!.
dont know how it would finish yet
but what do you think so far!?Www@QuestionHome@Com