Question: Help for my book (:!?
i need some advice on the book im writing!.
its the first book ive written, but i know theres going to be a sequal
its not going to be published or anything, its just a bit of fun!.
so basically there's this 17 year old girl who's going out with this older guy, whos 20, and he's a famous actor!.
but he cheats on her!.
i've got three endings for the book and i dont know how to end it, what do you think!?
1- they break up and go their seperate ways
2- they get back together
3- they break up but she has to find him to tell him shes pregnant!?
thanks xWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hmm sounds pretty good i think that the comment that the person left saying he gets in an accident and hes left to raise the child!.that woluld be really good you coluld also have a sequel then!=]Www@QuestionHome@Com
How about they break up and go their seperate ways although she's not told him she's pregnant - he has an accident on the set of his latest movie and she turns up at the hospital with a nice big bump - he recovers, she dies in childbirth and he's left to raise the sprogg so has to sacrifice his work!.
I wanna read it already - lol! :o)Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is how some books like that end:
the girl finds an honest guy--- and goes out with him- making that famous actor jealous!. maybe they can get back together!. the actor doesn't cheat anymore and has learned his lesson!. the girl forgives and hopes for a better start with him!.
blah,blah,blah
hope this helped! :PWww@QuestionHome@Com
Option 3, 'cos it opens the door for the follow-up!. Alternatively, mrquestion could show up and make some snide, pointless remarks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
number 3 because if there is a sequel you can carry on the storey line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What about this: she goes back to school and learns how to write properly in English and he starts reading GOOD books so he can help her avoid writing facile books!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Number 1 ,they break up and go their seperate ways !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The 3rd, and perhaps add a little more too it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like the 3rd ending
because if you do a sequual like you said you would
it would give a story for itWww@QuestionHome@Com
It would depend on if the guy in the story is likable!. Do we want to see him again in the sequel!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds boring, blow them all upWww@QuestionHome@Com