I think it's quite apt!. The novel is going to be all about a home-loving girl who still lives at home with her elderly parents and her hobbies include; knitting, embroidery, chess, cards, ornithology and reading books!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Books & Authors> The Girl In The Red Rubber Dress And Thigh Boots - is this a good title for my nQuestion: The Girl In The Red Rubber Dress And Thigh Boots - is this a good title for my new book!? I think it's quite apt!. The novel is going to be all about a home-loving girl who still lives at home with her elderly parents and her hobbies include; knitting, embroidery, chess, cards, ornithology and reading books!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it sounds like an awful porno!.!.!. def need to cut 'rubber' and 'thigh boots'!. the red dress is okay though if you want to keep it!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com No!.!.!. Can you really imagine shy retiring types older ladies, awkward teenagers, respectable book-club members asking for it in a library!? sometimes the *shock* factor works against you!. Might i suggest a slightly less racy alternative such as um, "rubber" which is suggestive!.!.!. but discreet or "Thigh high" which is also a bit more subtle!. Or something along those lines anyway!. Your book, you think of something you like!. !.!.!. other than "The Girl In The Red Rubber Dress And Thigh Boots " of courseWww@QuestionHome@Com No girl whose hobbies include embroidery, chess, knitting or ornithology owns a red rubber dress, and it very much sounds like the closest that she comes to thigh boots is a nice, sensible pair of wellies!. Sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Somehow I can’t picture a girl who lives at home with her elderly parents and enjoys those hobbies as wearing rubber dresses and thigh boots ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com Don't get the association with the book - why is she wearing a red rubber dress and thigh boots!? Her hobbies certainly don't call for either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's good, perhaps omit the last part, so it becomes 'The Girl in the Red Rubber Dress' or even 'The Girl in the Red Dress'!. Less of a mouthful!Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a little long!. Short and sweet keeps it memorable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it's really long!. i would name it something shorter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its kinda long and unless she has a side job, doesn't seem to fit who she is!? Maybe The Girl in the Rubber Dress!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Girl makes it seem kinda childish but the rest sounds like something one would look at and think i want to read this!Www@QuestionHome@Com I would just drop it to The Girl in the Red Rubber Dress shorter is betterWww@QuestionHome@Com Far too long! Red Dress and Thigh Boots is betterWww@QuestionHome@Com Cut thigh boots but I like the girl in the red rubber dress Www@QuestionHome@Com that's a little long!. take that title and shorten it down!.!.!. im thinking!.!.!. hookerWww@QuestionHome@Com No too long, how about "The Girl at Home"Www@QuestionHome@Com little long maybe but good Www@QuestionHome@Com |