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Question: Do you like this long story!?
a man was walking home!.''honey, i'm HOME'' said the man!. the man was named anklebone!. hankiloobatoon went in the kitchen!. his wife, Samoan turned around at her face transformed to an alien!. ''i hope you would'' said the wife!. she transformed to a cow alien anklebone throwed beer at the wife!. the wife turned to a baby!. then [i'll call hankiloobatoon: homer] homer feel so sorry for himself,grabbed the baby and 24 years later!. homer was 68 years old!. how old was he 24 years ago!? the wife,Samoan turned 24 years old!. it was the future then!. the robots came out of samoan's big tummy!. the robots died that they burst so loud!. samoan was okay!. 1 year later, pumpkins ruled earth and destroyed mars!. ''we have come for thee soul'' said the first pumpkin as he stole samoan's soul!. and samoan died!. then the sky was shining, pumpkins got burned up because anklebone destroyed the pumpkins!. whew, what a relief!. so anklebone watched samoan die!. ''hi, ooooh'' said samoan bleeding!. ''no wonder i will see you again'' said anklebone turning himself younger by a gun!. he turned 24 years old!. he was safe!. he grabbed a hat and walked hone!. come again and see the new adventures!. that story i said about that man and the woman being ruled by pumpkins, it was called anklebone attacks the pumpkins!. next you will see is ankle bone versus the undertaker!. rate the story!. do you like it!? do you hate it!? what do you think that story is about!? thank you,come again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ha ha!. I actually read it twice!.Lmao
I would like some of whatever you are on!.
No rating!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i happen too think this is the dumbest story ever and i cant belive i just wasted my time!. whoever did write this is crazy and possibly mental! idkWww@QuestionHome@Com

No!. It's just a load of babbling!. You haven't een tried to make it make sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Utter rubbish if you want the truthWww@QuestionHome@Com

NOT GOOD DUDE! STAY IN SCHOOL!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

what!?!!?!!?!
sorry, but i didn't understand a single thing in that!.
it made me laugh though! XDWww@QuestionHome@Com

i did not read it
i hate long stories if it were short i would haveWww@QuestionHome@Com

i dont knowWww@QuestionHome@Com

Would take me a while to even consider reading that !.!.
its too long !.!. (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm!.!.its all right i suppose!. but i don't really like long storiesWww@QuestionHome@Com

its a bit confusing sorry i rate it 3/10 and who is "hankiloobatoon "Www@QuestionHome@Com

It does not make any sense at all!. The man says"Honey, I'm home "and the next response from the wife was "I hope you would"!.Then the wife transformed into something that the reader has no idea what it is!. This thing then throws beer at the wife!. Wasn't the transformed thing already the wife!? Did she throw beer at herself!? Then, who's Homer!? You never introduced a character named Homer!. If it's the man, he should have had a name in the first sentence!. But it doesn't really matter!. Even if it made more sense, it is not interesting!. It's like you threw bunch of sentences together with dialogue that does not go together!. It's definitely not a "long story"!. It would not even qualify as a short story or even just a story!.Why did you even post this!. Is it a joke or are you really trying to write something here!?Www@QuestionHome@Com