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Question: What do you think of my story plot!? !?
hello to everyone!. basically, I'm writing a novel, and would like for everyone to tell me their opinions and constructive criticism!. My main character is called Natalie!. She has just come back from holiday!. Natalie goes to the loo, and when she comes out, she's somewhere different!.!.!. she is in a Elizabethan bar, (wearing tiny denim shorts and a low-cut top, oh dear) and is utterly confused!. anyway, when she gets used to it, she meets a man, called William!. He is the one and only - William Shakespeare!. She gushes to him, "oh my god, I've seen and read everything you've ever wrote!. My favorite it Romeo and Juliet!" And, he replies, "Romeo and Juliet!?" confused - (he hasn't wrote it yet!.) anyway, they fall in love, and its how shakespeare got the story idea for romeo and juliet!. Natalie can't stay in Shakespearean time, so when she comes back, there is a parcel waiting for her!. it is the original manuscript of Romeo and juliet!. it says in the front -;
for Natalie Jones!.

wot do u fink!? sorry if my synopsis is a bit confusing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Have to reply that without a lot of good research into the life, times and all works of Shakespeare, AND a clever way to share it, this sounds like a pretty thin plot!.
You did see the movie 'Shakespeare in Love' didn't you!? If not, try it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It may be a little cliche, as some people say but if you really love the plot then you can write about it!! I think that it has the potential to become a great book! So just write for yourself, and don't worry what other people think!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's seems okay!. But please don't post twice, especially since you were already answered multiple times before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is a film, called Shakespeare in Love!. And the parcel coming to her is very cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its wonderful!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Talk about cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com