hello to everyone!. basically, I'm writing a novel, and would like for everyone to tell me their opinions and constructive criticism!. My main character is called Natalie!. She has just come back from holiday!. Natalie goes to the loo, and when she comes out, she's somewhere different!.!.!. she is in a Elizabethan bar, (wearing tiny denim shorts and a low-cut top, oh dear) and is utterly confused!. anyway, when she gets used to it, she meets a man, called William!. He is the one and only - William Shakespeare!. She gushes to him, "oh my god, I've seen and read everything you've ever wrote!. My favorite it Romeo and Juliet!" And, he replies, "Romeo and Juliet!?" confused - (he hasn't wrote it yet!.) anyway, they fall in love, and its how shakespeare got the story idea for romeo and juliet!. Natalie can't stay in Shakespearean time, so when she comes back, there is a parcel waiting for her!. it is the original manuscript of Romeo and juliet!. it says in the front -;
for Natalie Jones!.
wot do u fink!? sorry if my synopsis is a bit confusing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com