Please could you give me some opinions on my one-scene-so-far-fanfiction!?
I wrote this before Breaking Dawn came out - it's my own version of the scene where Edward bites Bella!. Hopefully I'll write more soon!. Please comment or give constructive critisism! It would make me very happy xD
http://www!.fanfiction!.net/s/4608772/1/My!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com