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Question: If you want to relive Twilight/(Breaking Dawn)!.!.!?
Please could you give me some opinions on my one-scene-so-far-fanfiction!?
I wrote this before Breaking Dawn came out - it's my own version of the scene where Edward bites Bella!. Hopefully I'll write more soon!. Please comment or give constructive critisism! It would make me very happy xD

http://www!.fanfiction!.net/s/4608772/1/My!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes, I love it!. I'm afraid to say this but it kinda is better than Stephenie's version!.!.ouch!.!.!.don't tell anyone! There would be nothing that you could change about it!. GREAT JOB!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its beautiful!

long like twilightWww@QuestionHome@Com