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Question: My story plot what do you think!?
hello to everyone!. basically, I'm writing a novel, and would like for everyone to tell me their opinions and constructive criticism!. My main character is called Natalie!. She has just come back from holiday!. Natalie goes to the loo, and when she comes out, she's somewhere different!.!.!. she is in a Elizabethan bar, (wearing tiny denim shorts and a low-cut top, oh dear) and is utterly confused!. anyway, when she gets used to it, she meets a man, called William!. He is the one and only - William Shakespeare!. She gushes to him, "oh my god, I've seen and read everything you've ever wrote!. My favorite it Romeo and Juliet!" And, he replies, "Romeo and Juliet!?" confused - (he hasn't wrote it yet!.) anyway, they fall in love, and its how shakespeare got the story idea for romeo and juliet!. Natalie can't stay in Shakespearean time, so when she comes back, there is a parcel waiting for her!. it is the original manuscript of Romeo and juliet!. it says in the front -;
for Natalie Jones!.
wot do u fink!? sorry if my synopsis is a bit confusing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Creative and unique (are you from England or something!? I noticed you said loo and holiday) anyway be sure to be as true to Shakespeare as possible, read as much of his work as you can so that it has some level of realism!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I totally agree to the person that commented before me, this is really creative and unique!. I like it and I would defienetly read the rest :)
xx!.
P!.S!. - I'm also starting!.!.!. or trying lol to write a novel and I just put up a question asking if my first chapter was a good starter!. If you don't want to answer it then that's fine, I was just wondering, but start writing your story! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lol that's really original and I would like to read the whole book!. I think you could also include some of his work maybe passing in the bar or around the village and they could be the ones shakespeare based some of his writing on :) Www@QuestionHome@Com
omg thats got to be one of the m,os creative plots ive ever read! i totally love it, please email me when u have any chapters done, I would LOVE to read it <3
xoxo
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Wow, I think its really great!. It sounds like it could be a really interesting story, if its written well!. I love romance stories!Www@QuestionHome@Com
that actually sounds pretty cool!. but you have to include HOW she gets back to her real world and why!. like does she discover something or what!?
but yeah that sounds like an awesome plot!Www@QuestionHome@Com
No that's really cool and creative, I would read it, and i'm not even in to shakepeare! =] I hope it gets published!
Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com
omg!.
thts rly ahhmazing!.
good luck!!
:))Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that is awesome!. I really want you to write it!!! The idea is uniqueWww@QuestionHome@Com