Is this story line for my book any good?

Question: Is this story line for my book any good!?

This is my story line: there is a 16 year old magician fighting "a beast" with his older brothers and he eventually becomes very powerful!. There is a new beast (all working for one monster) in every book!.!.!. Please give adviceWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Sunds ood so far
Some things to look at though so we get a bigger picture

How does he become powerful!?
What kind of beast!?
Why was he fighting the beast!?
how many brothers does he have!?
what do the brothers look like!?
how are they magical!?
setting, time, date e!.t!.c

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It seems that a magician could do away with the beast very handily if he has become that powerful!. You might want to try a beast that has magical powers itself!. Or perhaps another magician who uses beasts as his familiars!.

When writing a story you have to be very careful of plot holes and the obvious!. People pick up on these things very quickly!. Many believe this is where Stephanie Myers went wrong with her vampires!. She just ran amuk with them and went with things right off the top of her head!.

Look for the obvious in your stories and try to build on something that makes your readers think things out for themselves!. You don't want them saying, "Oh Yeah, right! Why doesn't the magician just make the beast burst in flames!?" See my point!?

PJ M Www@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds interesting!. thats pretty good!. it kind of reminds me of the chronicles of narnia!. i like that alot!. keep going!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This sounds very good to me!. However, most publishers have become very wary of books about boy wizards!. Be warned!.!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can't possibly tell by how little you wrote!. Post more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds cool id buy it
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