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Question: What do you think of when you read this poem!?
There is a soul
Whose mind is set,
Whose heart is whole,
Who is perfect!.

I'd go infinate distance
to reach this soul!.
Though it'd make no sense
To make me whole!.

You are the one
Who ---------------
Who shines like Sun
Who is perfect!.

What I have to offer
Is but a promise!.
Though it is utter
What I give is this:

You shall cross the barren desert
But you shall not die of thirst!.
You shall wander far in safety
though you do not know the way!.

You shall speak your words in foreign lands
and all will understand!.
If you pass through raging waters,
you shall not drown!.

If you walk amid the burning flames,
you shall not be harmed!.
If you stand before the power of Hell,
I shall block you from it all!.

And if this was given to you anonymously and personally, what would your thoughts be!? Lastly, what should go in the blank space!? I have trouble matching the lines up in a nice smooth line because of this one line!. (There's a bit of Numbers in this poem!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think you should switch the blank to who is perfect and then change the last line to something else!. it will make it flow better!.
at the beginning it sounds like a love story, but at the end its sounds like its talking about God!. i would think, if give to me, someone was either in love with me or wanting to push their religion on me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are the one
I will always protect
Who shines like Sun
Who is perfect


maybe!?!?

If I was given this poem, I would probably cry!. From happiness and sheer emotion!. I'd be eternally grateful for this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com