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Question: Is this a good start for a Twilight fanfic!?
I'm writing a fanfic and this is just the prologue & first chapter!. From this , would you continue reading!? Just curious!.!.!.!.

Thanks!
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This is a Twilight Saga fanfic, that takes place after Breaking Dawn!. Let me know what you think!


Prologue
It was an amazing feeling, being imprinted on!. It was like no other feeling in the world!. Nothing in the world could ever compare!. I was in love with him and he was more than in love with me!. He would do anything to save me, and even though I’d do the same for him, it wasn’t like I’d ever get the chance!. He’d protect me from anything, risk his whole being for me, without a second thought!. My life now depended on this boy in a way I’d never thought possible!. This boy I’d known for only a few seconds before committing my whole life to him and becoming a wolf girl!. This boy whose name is Seth Clearwater!.

Chapter one
“Ginny!?” I heard Seth call from the other room!.
“Yes, Seth!?” I replied!. I was sitting in the middle of the Cullen living room, Renesmee in my lap!. Seth and I had agreed to babysit for the beautiful half-vampire half-human child!. Edward and Bella had wanted to go out for a little while and the other Cullens were hunting!. Jacob had some wolf thing to attend to!. I had to admit, I’d been a little freaked out by the Cullens!. After all, they were strong, cold, blood-sucking vampires and I was a tiny, warm-blooded human girl!. But Seth had reassured me time after time that they were different, “vegetarian” vampires and that they would never do anything to hurt me!. I knew Seth would never put me in danger and I trusted him with all my heart!. So, I decided to meet the Cullens and was now very good friends with them!. Bella and Alice were like my sisters, Emmett the big brother I’d always wanted!. Carlisle, Esme, and Jasper always treated me with warmth and kindness too!. Rosalie was the only one who didn’t seem too sure of me!. But that didn’t bug me!. I had gotten used to it!.
“Would you mind if I stepped out for a moment!?” Seth called back!.
“Wolf-thing!?” I asked!.
He walked out of the kitchen and into the living room!. “Kind of,” he said sheepishly, his enchanting dark eyes staring at me intently!.
“Seth, you know that’s fine!. Nessie and I’ll have some girl time!.”
“Ok,” he said!. “I love you!.” He walked over and put his burning lips to my forehead!.
“Love you, too!. Be careful!.”
“I always am,” Seth said with that little smile that had had my heart speeding every time!. He ran out the door, and slammed it!. He was as graceful as he could be, but I didn’t think he was still quite used to his extreme size and strength!.
Nessie looked up at me with those big brown eyes!. She placed her tiny palm to my cheek!. She showed me how she felt about her Jacob, and then showed me an image of Seth!. I nodded to tell her that I felt the same way about my Seth that she felt about her Jacob!. Her eyes lit up with understanding!. I smiled at her!. Renesmee had also been hard to get used to!. It had taken me awhile to understand her odd gift!. At first, I’d been a little afraid but also amazed!. After a few days though, pretty little Renesmee had won me over!. She was about a year old, technically, but she looked about seven!. She was unusually bright and intuitive for her age!. Everything about her was wonderful!.
Nessie and I continued to watch the television for a little while!. It was a brainless show for children!. I was bored of it, and I could tell she was too!. She placed her hand against my cheek again, and showed me a vision of the two of us, skipping by the creek in the Cullen’s backyard!. “Can we!?” she asked, in her pleasant little voice!.
“Of course,” I told her and we stood up and began to walk out the door and toward the creek!. When we were outside, I laid down to stare up at the sun and clouds while Renesmee ran around collecting wildflowers!. It was a rare sunny day in Forks, Washington!. Nessie’s skin sparkled slightly in the sunlight!. I could feel my skin tanning!. It was amazing!.
After about an hour, Nessie and I fell asleep outside, with about twenty clover rings and crowns surrounding us!. I dreamt of Seth, like I usually did, but this time his face looked pained!. I wasn’t sure why but he looked like he was suffering!. I didn’t like it; it hurt me to see him hurt!. I was able to tune out the nightmare with Renesmee’s help; she rested her little palm on my cheek as we napped!. I saw her lovely dreams of Jacob, her parents, and a meadow filled with wildflowers!.
Suddenly, the dreams stopped!. A noise had awakened her and me, and her thoughts were filled with fear!. It wasn’t a sound either of us recognized!. It was a evil snarl!. I sat up quickly and held Nessie to me!. I knew I wouldn’t be able to protect her, if anything were to happen, but the gesture felt helpful and calmed down a little bit!.
Renesmee’s eyes searched the area around the creek, and with her half-vampire vision, she was able to see more than I was!. She kept her hand at my cheek though, so I coulWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i am a major fan of the twilight series (its probably unhealthy =P) so youve got me hooked
i think you should defiantly keep writing your a great author if i do say so myself =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. That's awesome!. I totally loved reading it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes on fanfic I am TwilightEdwardBella95Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is great!! :D
I love fan fiction, because when the books are done, then you can still read thousands of other stories!.!.!.keep writing this story :DWww@QuestionHome@Com