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Question: I need an ending for my story!.!.!.!?
ok so im writing a short story for school and its about a girl who on the last day of school (also friday the 13th) gets hit by a car and when she wakes up in the hospital, she can hear peoples thoughts!. i need help to figure out what happens in the end!. also im on a limit!. the story has to be at least 500 words but not like a novel and be 6 pages long either so i need a quick, explainable ending of what happens to her and how the story ends, but i want it to be something really good and is like "wow i didnt expect that"
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that the peoples voices she hears end up finding their way to her, maybe there can be a mystery involved!? Or maybe if the car accident was that another car rams into her car or something that it had to do with the person in the other car!? Or maybe she was in a coma the whole time and she thinks it never really happened but then she starts seeing the people who's thoughts she heard and they know that she was hearing they're thought or somethingWww@QuestionHome@Com
well, maybe she could like hearing thoughts at first
and then get really frustrated with it because they aren't thoughts she wanted to hear!.
So she lives with it for a few months and then she gets into another accident, and wake up without the ability !? Then she has like an epiphany or something!. lol!. I don't know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
she reads in a guy's mind that he wants to kill himself because he thinks no one cares about him, so she goes up to him and convinces him not to kill himself, and they fall in love and her gift goes away and she realizes that she got the ability so she cud find her soulmate and now she has,Www@QuestionHome@Com
Maybe something else traumatic could happen to her!.!.!. maybe she almost drowns or gets hit by another car and she stops hearing thoughts and is normal again!.!.!. I don't know something along those lines :)
Hope I helped!!!
Merry
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Try not to some everything up!. Leeve an opening to keep people thinking, "what is going to happen now!?" Have a docter say something like, "she can never be cured!." then end it!. it would keep people thinking!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
How about getting hit by a car again and losing her special talent!? OR they do a scan and finds out she has cancer -- the tumor is what really causing her to hear peoples thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Make the main character die!.!.!.
That would be a great surprise!.
Make her gift of reading people
mind get her killed {:Www@QuestionHome@Com
how about she learns she was adopted and that her real mother was the one who hit her with the car!.
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Maybe she hates the voices so much that she kills herself!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
she learns to cope with her mind abilities and becomes a famous physic when she gets older!. and don't make her get hit by a car so she loses her abilities!.!.!.too predictable!.
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