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Question: Would you read a story about this!?
16 years ago a woman and a merman had a daughter!. Then the father and mother of the baby both die and the baby goes to live with her mother's sister and husband!. So this 1/2 mermaid is 16 and has the appearance of just a normal teenager!. She lives a normal life with the exception that if she gets in contact with water she turns into a mermaid, complete with tail and gills!. So she tries to avoid water and still live her life!. But then this surfer moves to town and she falls in love and tries to keep her secret from him!. She also has to put up with the cliche stuff like school, homework, teachers, parties, friends, mean girls, popularity!. Do you think this sounds good or not!? I know I didnt explain it very good!.

But I need your opinion on my character names

Girl- Raine
Surfer- Ace
Mother- Anna
Father- Nevell
Aunt- Sarah
Uncle- Bob

Other Characters:
Claire
Dakota
Jemma
Grace
Faith
Tanner
Colby
JovialWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OK, I absolutely LOVE your character names!.!.!.though the story plot does sound a bit like Aquamarine, H2O, and The Thirteenth Year (a disney movie) I'd definitely read your book, as i love anything slightly fantastically fantasy with dragons and mermaids and unicorns and the lot!. So don't give up! All the other authors in the world would tell you that too! =^!.^=Www@QuestionHome@Com

how about : the parents don't die and both she and the mother need to deal with the nature of the father!. how would she get to see him!. how would they live!? how would your mermaid feel when cought in between the two worlds and having to deal with both of them because that's her family!?
just to make it a little more complicated!.!.!.!.:)
do something about the cliche-names!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It does sound alot like the show H2o and the movies aquamarine and the thirteenth year combined!. Maybe you could switch some things around, and make it more original!. I would read it! Good ideas and even if it isn't 100% original just write it! I'm sure there are lots of books out there that are like that!. Or, maybe, you could write a book series to H2o or just one book to Aquamarine!. No matter whater what, just write it! Maybe it could lead to more original ideas for yourself!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the idea very much so yes i would read it!. I also really like the name Raine and Ace!. I always liked those two names!. Truth be told i like all those names!. they suite the people very well!. but it does sound a lot like h2o maybe you could try to come at the water situation a bit differently!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Reminds me of Aquamarine!.!.!.
I'm just going to be honest : I wouldn't read it!.
But if you really love writing, then just do it!
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Sounds like a book I read 2 years ago!.!.!.!.The Tail of Emily Windsnap!. You should read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ummm isn't that basically the plot of the show h20!? tell me if im wrong!. i like the names except bob!.!.!.and jovial!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds very h20/aquamarine!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like that show H2o!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

no i wouldn't read a story like that!.!.!. i am not 5 years old!.Www@QuestionHome@Com