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Question: What do you think of this little thing I wrote!?
my dreams are too big, this town too small
i beg and i plead, you just walk down the hall
slammin' doors on what you know is right
i guess i'll keep the stars just in sight
one of these days i'll make you wish
wish you'd had a hold on this

as that big texas sky fades in the rearview
i hope you know, i'm thinkin' of you
everything you ever said or did
right now, is my oxygen
fueling my drive
the stars in my eyes
slammin' doors turned out to be alright





I know, I'm not that good of a writer!. I just wanted to see what kind of tips people could give me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow, I really, really like it!
It is so emotionally true!.!.do you know what I mean!?
Like, it hasn't got even a little piece of fakeness!.
I think it is lovely, please write some more!
Except maybe slamming not slammin'!.
:)
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Wow,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that is great, beautiful even!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good it makes the reader feel how you feelWww@QuestionHome@Com