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Question: Does this sound like a good idea for a novel and if not what would you add to make it better!?
It is about two 15 year old girls named Ariana and Taylor whose birthdays are only a day apart!. And on Ariana's birthday she has a sleepover at her house and there is Taylor, and two other girls!. When the girls sit down to watch a movie in Ariana's basement, Taylor sees something outside that looks like a light!. Ariana seemed to see it too, so Ariana and Taylor go outside to check it out!. At first, they don't see anything but then a 6-inch purple glow is about a foot away from them, and inside it, they see the shape of a human body!. The glow begins to dim, and then a delicate, fragile, beautiful fairy is floating only a foot away from them! The fairy looks at a scroll and then at them!. Oh, and by the way, the fairy's name is Una!. Taylor and Ariana slowly reach out to the fairy!. The firy goes to touch them, and they feel a spark of energy!. Then, Una disapears!.

Later in the story, Taylor and Ariana find out they are sisters, they become friends with Una, and they find out they are half human-half fairy!. And a lot more stuff!. So, do you thWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As an adult, I couldn't get past my skepticism--and I have a very good imagination!. I just couldn't suspend belief that they would be so blase and not say something to their friends before rushing outdoors!.

On the positive side--use amethyst instead of purple!. If you've ever seen an amethyst geode cracked open you'll understand how beautiful the light would be!.

I think you could turn this idea into a fairy tale for children, or one for young teens if there was a message, i!.e!. moral to the story!.

Regardless, keep writing and prove me wrong!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good for a children's story, but I woulnd't read it!. I'd read it to a child though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com