the script is from the point of view of this 14 year old girl and she has a mom and a younger sister and well her dad died a couple of years ago in a fatal "car crash" that somehow the media never new about! and well this 14 year old girl, i have decided to call MACKENZIE is extremely intelligent and well her grandmother on her moms side isnt actually her dads mom but moms mom(because they todl the girls that the grandma was her dads mom for undercover problems) and the mom and grandmother have been going on for about 20 years doing this thing where they marry rich rich guys and then put millions and millions on their life insurance and then murder them somehow and then keep the money! but when the mom married Mackenzies and Maddies (younger sister) dad the two girls were never actually planned and ruined the moms and grandmothers multiple undercover life scheme and this is why they positively hate mackenzie but try to hide it by basically spoiling her! so that is the twisted bit this is the horror part, one day when mackenzie is in the attic searching for her old ballet shoes for her sister she finds in the dustiest darkest corner her dads trunk and she opens it and looks in an album and inside is a picture of her dad as a baby with these huge blue eyes and this was a feature famous about her dad and is mentioned ALOT in the film before the attic scene and the baby has massive blue eyes and is being cuddled by his mom, but its not her grandmother who she has known its another lady! In distress mackenzie searches for a picture of her mom as a baby and finds one and yes cuddling her is the grandmother! Mackenzie catches on very quickly and in panic well starts to panic and by accidently pulls on a lever in the attic and the wall breaks open and out shoots her dads dead body! well anyway she screams her head off and runs out of the house and whilst she runs round the alleys and round a corner a man is there ( im kindof hoping leonardo di caprio can play him) and he is one of the men she screwed over and he died and he is in fact and angel but he got sent to hell because he got murdered by a battleax (the mom) and he explain everything to her! but more to the gory bits, the grandma and mom cant chance anything and have to kill mackenzie and maddie so they hold maddie with a gun to head telling her we'll kill this girl or we'll kill you mackenzie and mackenzie picks herself but the grandma still shoots maddie but this angel devil thing (leonardo) saves her and also mackenzies best friend, Gordy gets shot by mackenzies mom when he tried to save mackenzie and in the end the angel thing ( not sure what his name is yet) murders them both and then kills himself but then mackenzie kills herself because she is alone!
any alternate ending ideas from anyone would be much appreciated!Www@QuestionHome@Com