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Question: Meh i wanna start righting a story is this any good!?
Kay so im not really sure about thewhole thing O:
So here it goes:
Its basically about!.!.
Theres a girl, age 14, who is diagnosed with some disease and her life expectancy is only a few months!. She comes from a rich family and her father would NOT let his only daughter die of some "silly" disease!. He paid scientists to come up with a cure as fast as they could and when they were far off from finding the cure after they had 2 months to work on it, he had his daughter frozen!.!.!. literally!. Frozem so she would not grow!.!. yet she would still live!. She's supposed to be "dead" only her heart is beating, her mind should have no thoughts!. but something went wrong when they were giving her the drugs to make this work!. She can think, and feel but in no way can her body move or respond!. She counts the days and has only her thoughts to keep her company, thoughts of her friends!.!. how the world has changed and her boyfriend!.
Yea!.!.!. thats bout all i have so far ;-; only like one chapter!.haha any help is appreciated!. and tell me if this is any good so farrr<3
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you know that sounds pretty interesting!. Maybe you could make comparisons with someone being stuck alone on a deserted Island and when the girl is thinking inside her own mind, you could use the deserted island setting, it would be easier doing this, having her in a physical place (although it is only her thoughts) rather than just saying, she thought this and she thought that!. Rather than having her frozen, you might say that her body temperature was reduced so it slows right down, because that is what surgeons do sometimes in surgery!. I think her literally being frozen wont work because she would die!. Id like to know how the rest of the story goes, please keep me updatedWww@QuestionHome@Com
First, don't worry about the spelling and grammar right now; just get the story on paper, in the computer or what ever!. If the story is really deserving to be published there are editors and proof readers to take care of that!. The main thing is to get the story out of your head and onto paper
So far sounds like it might make a decent movie!. Keep at ti!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it sounds good, and you may have not even heard of this, but there is a movie called "awake" where a man goes into surgery and he is supposed to be unconscious, but he is thinking clearly while its happening!. your story sounds similar to this, so just be aware!.!.!.!. :) Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is amazing!. As long as you give good insight into feeling it'll be great!. First you should research psychology, or take a class!.
Good line to use:
She felt as if she were trapped within herself; no escape from the pain of knowing that in her lonely world of ice, there was only herself!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well it depends on how you right it!. It might be pretty boring if she can't do anything but think!. Maybe you could have her go crazy or something!. I know I would be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
An interesting thesis!. Be sure you use "spell-check"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Umm start with learning how to spell the word WRITING!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good plot!. Like it!.
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