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I am starting to write a new story (im 12) and I am thinking about writing a story about a girl who goes to a girls school and she tries to make friends but there all in there own groups and she realises the dark side of girls schools !.!.!. all the girls are fake and the girl explains this throughout the story !.

I know My description is a bit rubbish but you get the idea

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As the new school girl looked around the cracked wall to find a group of 6 girls, in black!. They darted to me and put a knife to my neck and shouted where is the money i handed over the money!.
The girl cried against an red brick wall i slipped down and scraped all my back!. Then a old girl helped me up and ask was i ok!.!.!.

Then carry it out like that!.

I hoped this helped u

good luck

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teenage angst!. Then you grow up and realize that all that stuff from school still exists in the workplace!. What if one of the characters was you!? How would you feel if you realized (a) I'm not popular!. (b) The popular people seem to be a bigger mess than those they claim are a mess!. (c) Actually, the misfits are more genuine and decent than the pretty crowd everybody seems to want to make friends with!.

yeah, some of my childhood, sorry, I'm a grownup and that was a while ago!. You have to figure out what it is about the characters that you really care about!. Most of us write because we want to communicate something and we find it hard to do it another way!. What is that something for you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds a bit flat!. You need something more, like they were nice to her before and she accidently kissed one of their bfs (she didn't know he was her boyfriend) and they all reject her and make her life miserable!. then say about the dark side!?

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add a twist to it!.
the girls in the school are really aliens in costumes planning to take over this one girl with gossip and rumors!.
the haunted high school
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the idea has been used before but the circumstances can be different, make sure you have some one proof read it!. There, they're and their always pass spell check even when their wrong!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds good!. you could use that story line to create a really good story!. sounds good! i love writing too !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

is a'ight but remember she needs to be beaten and stripped to show the really dark sideWww@QuestionHome@Com

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theres nothing at all that is special about it, i wouldnt even glance at it!.
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add a twist to the plot and you could have a really good book :)Www@QuestionHome@Com