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Question: I wrote a song is it good read the other part to see it!?
Here is my song the name of it is crush

I seen you you seen me we didnt talk but we said every thing
when you looked me in the eyes i swear i was hypmotized by love
its just a crush its just a crush the next day we went to school and every thing I agreed to go to the party !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. I seen you
you seen her when you looked her in the eyes I swear she was hypmotized by love its just a crush

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
get rid of "I seen" "you seen"!.!.!.also do you mean "hypnotized" not hypmotized!?!.!.!.other than that, it's absolutely horrible!.!.!.seriously!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Grammar and spelling aside, it's terrible!. I'm not being mean, just honest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com