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ok, i have to write a book review !.!.!.!.!. how does it sound so far
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A book with a cup on the cover!. The cup has a drawing of a road!. The word “Caution: Long - distance romance ahead” is written on the mouth part of the cup!.
On the cup, and heart with a squiggly line going down the middle is popping out!. On the upper right hand corner, there is a smaller and darker heart!. The big heart has the title of the book, “Rocky Road Trip” written in big, silver letters!. The cover may not be attention catching, but the book is very good!. The book today is about $5!.99!. It has been 7 - 8 years since the book was out!.
The main character of the book is Courtney!. In Clark’s last book, “Banana Splitsville”, Courtney was a senior!. But, in “Rocky Road Trip”, Courtney is in college and 1,000 miles apart from her friends, family, and boyfriend (Grant)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it sounds kinda messy, in book reports you dont necessarily need to explain the cover of the book but if you do why dont you try it this way:

Entering into a bookstore you might notice a book with a cup on the cover!. The cup is designed with a road warning "Caution: Long-distance romance ahead" and a heart in the upper corner displaying the title of the book to be "Rocky Road Trip" in big silver letters!. You may not think that this is a very eye catching cover, however this is an enchanting tale!.
The main Character of this book is named Courtney!. She is the heroine in the Author Clark's last book, "Banana Splitsville" in which Courtney was portrayed as a high school senior!. In "Rocky Road Trip" Courtney's characters story develops as she enters College as a freshman, 1,000 miles away from everything she knows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The beginning was a little confusing because I didn't know what you were talking about!.

In the last sentence, you said she was 1000 miles apart from her friends and family!. You should change apart to away!.

Finally, you could condense the paragraph you wrote about the cover!. It's a bit long!.

Good luck writing!

EDIT: Um, I'm confused!. If you don't want us to tell you what's wrong and how to fix it, why would you even post this question!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

The actual review is only three sentences of that!.
Don't take two paragraphs to talk about the cover!.!.!.
It can be summarized in one sentence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com