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Question: Good horror story!?
This is for English class; the topic is nightmares you never had

a family goes on vacation in the forests of Canada to this lodge!. this is like in exile, like no big places!. things are kinda creepy old pictures everywhere!. The next morning all of the guests cars are trashed!. and the dist!. caps are all on the ground of the lobby!. in the afternoon a guest is dead in the pool!. that night they all get murdered slowly and painfully!. The eldest kid of a family makes it out with her baby brother!.

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tip for horror stories: good horrors stories deal with perversion of the innocent
have you ever heard of the movie "Black Sheep", it deals with this tip to the extreme!. Some place in Scotland something happens to the sheep and they begin to ruthlessly attack neighboring people!.
you have to asnwer the questions:
why does the eldest kid make it out with her baby brother!?
why does everyone else die!?
who did it!?
Theres countless answers, and i like how its going on in my mind
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Horror is found in the unknown, the expectation, the suspense!. What you have is mostly gore and murder!. Given what you have, 90% of the story should take place with the family coming in, the exploration of the old lodging, a couple of small incidents for which there are no explanation and a long night in which mysterious events take place without resolution!. The actual murders are the least of what ought to constitute real horror!.

Go for suspense, not brutality - they are very different!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

"that night they all get murdered slowly and painfully!. The eldest kid of a family makes it out with her baby brother!."

ahah!. that totally reminds of The Hills Have Eyes!.

anyways, yea!. it definitely sounds like a great horror story :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

drop the "kinda creepy!." it sounds a bit naive
the sentences are choppy too!. try describing what the dead guest in the pool looks like!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!. kind of gruesome!.!.!. But if you need some good ideas go to www!.americanfolklore!.net/scarystories!.ht!.!.!.
They have some good stories!. Hope I helped!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes that's a creepy story! Good Imagination!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hell yeahh!
but gosh i would NOT like to see that movie
talk about having nightmares for the rest of your life!


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