Feedback on my kinda funny short story?

Question: Feedback on my kinda funny short story!?

3 people were brothers, 2 were smart, 1 was an idiot, then they created a magic slide without the idiouts help, whatever they say they would slide onto, the 1st smart one said diamonds, the 2nd smart one said gold, the last one was having so much he said, "wee! wee!"
the 1st landed into piles of diamonds, then 2nd landed into buckets of gold, the last wass in puddles of pissWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I think it would have been better if he somehow ended up making the smart kids fall in wee wee and then he took their treasures!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but I had to read it twice too just to understand it!.
It's not funny at all!.
You should change the part about where the 3rd one landed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Had to read it twice to understand it, you missed out some words and mis-spelt some others!. Sorry, not really funny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Funniest thing I have ever read in my entire life! I can't stop laughing!!

Okay, not really!. I'm just wanting the ten points!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've heard it before!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com