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Question: THESE ARE THE SYNOPSIS OF MY NEW FANTASY NOVEL READ AND TELL ME!?!?!?(PLZ DON'T STEAL IT)!?
BOOK 1 OPENS WITH A BOY NAMED VICTOR GREENE ,A 14 YRS OLD MATHEMATICAL GENIUS,BUT VICTOR REMAINS LONELY UNABLE TO COPE WITH ANY FRIENDS,TEACHERS OR PARENTS!.
HIS FATHER AN EERIE MACHINIST WHO DOESN'T SEEM TO CARE FOR HIS SON !.HIS MOTHER A SIMPLE WOMAN NAMED SALLEY GREENE,SHE USED TO WORK AS A WAITRESS AND NOW SHE SELLS COOKIES IN SMALL STORE,SHE PAYS ITS RENT FROM THE MONEY SHE GETS FROM THE COOKIES!.
UNFORTUNATELY,ONE DAY AFTER RETURNING FROM SCHOOL VICTOR IS INFORMED THAT HIS FATHER HAS BEEN MURDERED BY A MYSTERIOUS HAND!.!.!.!.!.VICTOR'S DEPRESSION INCREASES AND HE FINDS OUT HOW MUCH HE TRUELY LOVE HIS FATHER!.
VICTOR HAS BEEN DATING A GIRL FOR QUITE A LONG TIME NOW ,HER NEAME WAS CHELSEA,VICTOR DOESN'T FEEL LIKE MEETING HER ANYMORE ESPECIALY AFTER THE DEATH OF HIS FATHER,also HE KNOWS THAT SHE'S JUST LOVING HIS INTELLIGENCE!.VICTOR DECIDED TO TELL HER THAT HE CAN'T BE WITH HER ANYMORE,BUT CHELSEA TRIED TO GET CLOSER TO HIM AND also AVOID ANY TALK ABOUT THEIR RELATION,SO THE NEXT TIME THEY WENT OUT SHE BROUGHT WITH HER HER MATH HW PRETENDING NOT TO UNDERSTAND IT ,SO INSIDE THE CAFE AS VICTOR BEGAN EXPLAINING TO HER THE EQUATIONS !.!.!.!.!.!.HE WAS THINKING OF HIS DEAD FATHER!.!.!.!.BUT SUDDENLY WHILE WRITING DOWN ONE EQUATION HE FELT THAT HIS FINGERS ARE ACHING AND GREEN TINY FLEES EXPLODED OUT OF THE FLARING EQUATION!.!.!.AND EVERYONE BEGAN SCUTTLING AWAY!.!.!.!.!.

VICTOR STILL HOPING TO SLIP AWAY FROM HIS RELATION WITH CHELSEA WITHOUT HURTING HER EMOTIONS AND GOING TO HIS FATHER FUNERAL THE NEXT DAY!.
BUT THE NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL,HE FOUND OUT THAT CHELSEA IS JUST GIVING HIM THE COLD SHOULDER AND GETTING TO KNOW LEW STEAMY THE SCHOOL'S BULL!.!.!.!.CHELSEA DECIDES TO AVENGE HERSELF AND SENDS LEW TO DO SO!.!.!.!.!.!.AT THE FUNERAL VICTOR SHEDS SOME TEARS AND GETS TO MEET A CRIMSON HOODED MAN WITH CIRCULAR BADGE HOLDING A MATHEMATICAL EQUATION AND A MAGNIFYING LENS!.
THE MAN GIVES VICTOR A MAGNIFYING LENS WRAPPED IN RED PIECE OF WOOL!. AND TELL VICTOR TO TAKE CARE OF IT!.
THE NEXT DAY LEW BEGINS HIS PLAN BY KICKING VICTOR INFRONT OF THE WHOLE CLASS AND A FIGHT ARISES VICTOR DECIDES TO RUN AWAY!.!.!.!.!.
THE SAME NIGHT HE FINDS OUT FROM HIS MOTHER THAT A LEWS FATHER MR STEAMY IS COURTING HER FOR MARRIAGE
VICTOR NEARLY EXPLODES AT HER FACE AND HE RUNS TO HIS ROOM !.!.!.!.!.WHILE DOING SOME MATH EQUATIONS SPARKS OF FIRE FLY OUT OF THE EQUATIONS HE WRITE!.!.AND THEN AFTER FINDING OUT THAT THE LENS IS USED DO MAGICAL EQUATIONS HE BEGINS TO COPE WITH HIS NEW POWER TO DO MAGIC THROUGH MATH EQUATIONS!.!.!.!.BUT VICTOR'S WORLD TURNS OPSY TURVY WHEN HE JOINS THE MATHMAGE SECRET ORDER AND HE FINDS NEW SECRETS ABOUT HIS DEAD FATHER!.!.!.!.!.TRUE PARENTS AND HIS NEW POWERS!.!.!.also A LOVE TRIANGLE WILL RISE WHEN VICTOR FALLS IN LOVE WITH SARAH A NEW MATHMAGE MEMBER!.!.!.WHO also HOLDS MUCH SECRETS IN HER PAST!.!.!.!.!.!.BUT THE MATHMAGE ORDER IS FORCED TO FACE TO STOP SCORPIOS FROM FINDING HIS SOUL EQUATION THAT CAN BRING BACK HIS POWERS!.!.!.SO WEASELS WILL SLIP INTO THE SECRET ORDER TRYING TO BEGUILE THE MEMBERS !.!.!.!.TO REGAIN THEIR MASTERS EQUATION!.!.!.!.!.!.WHAT WILL VICTOR DO WHEN HE FINDS OUT ABOUT THE HORRID TRUTH THAT BINDS HIM TO SCORPIOS EQUATION!?!?!?!?

IS IT NICE AND ORIGINAL!?!?!?DO U FEEL LIKE COMPLETING IT!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I luv books - absolutely love them!. And this sounds lyk a gd storyline - very original!. I also lyk how you've made maths sumin so much more (i love maths - i am a geek i no - and i dont think people really see how great it actually is)!. I think you shuld give it a go and write this book!. It wont hurt to try will it! Good Luck! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow! im writing a book to buts its very different!.
Its very original but maybe less equations like they are a gate to the magic or just a way to control it!?
Keep on at it and good luck!!! ^o^ Www@QuestionHome@Com

Can you please take the Caps Lock off and re-post, I can't read it without giving myself a headache, sorry!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I started to read it, but then the caps locks made my brain melt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dude well Im an amateur novelist!. and according to me this story is nice!. but you need to do some changes!. if victor loves his dad, at the time of his death victor would think of finding his dad's murderer and nothing else!!!
PLEASE change it!. and you said victor is lonely unable to cope up with anyone, then how the hell he's dating a gal!?!?!? i'll tell you!. think again and again wat is wrong!.!.!. nice !. continue it!. all the bestWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really did try to read this but it literally, genuinely pains my eyes to read all the caps so I stopped!. If you could repost it properly then I would gladly give you a full critique of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com