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Question: Which should I use for the contest!?
Autumn
Bury my head, watch it cascade down!.
Hate, confusion, hate
Thinking makes vomit, sickness decay
Connection, plug into anything apart of the whole!.
Divulge all, discontinue the system
Slicing contains empty heat
Wall what wall!? It’s better than nothing at all!.
Lift my head to see falling trees
There’s nothing there but deterioration!.


WHAT IS THIS!?
Eyes of curiosity gazing, standing back in complete admiration!.
Listening as no listener has ever heard before!.
Understanding pieces scatter and glue themselves back together !.
Don’t need to touch just feel;
Don’t need to talk just tell!.
Worries subside, affliction apart
Lies no more the Soul’s start!.


Reverie
Curiosity goes wild… than SMACK desire,
Fixation on every part!.
Heart race!.
Fingers shake!.
Had no taste but comprehend sweetness;
Had no touch but realize flawlessness!.
Grasping, intertwining over the bar
Instantaneous reaction
Venerate a trap!.
Eyes are mine, look into them gaze
Glazed!.
Breathless !.
Amazed!.





Inhaling the Grasp

Deceiving Death was Her only option!.
Cold and torn, She ran towards the Door!.
Blankness all around, tightening at Her throat!.

Restriction of air came to no surprise,
Still, She panicked and tried to lean on the Door’s side

Occupying space was of no affliction!.
It was Her untamed heart that needed the Door’s attention!.

Light did not escape through the gap, yet She knew that it was there!.
Her grasp was merely a trap!.

Standing, She was not alone for the Door,
Although torn,
was her mirror and her escape!.
Opening the Door was the problem, broken hands conflicted Her fate!.

Hesitation restricted what limbs still functioned to be still!.
If only She could kill,
kill what’s inside, kill the protruding rot!.

With the wind pulsating through Her veins She grasped the warm brass knob,
twisting and turning, It opened not,
but with only the handle in Her hand,
She became alive again!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
3 (Reverie) - perhaps without punctuation!. It has a situation, a real feeling, a play whit words that I like!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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2-4 are good, my favorite is four!. Www@QuestionHome@Com