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Question: Chapter name!? PLEASE HELP!?
Here is the chapter im having a writers block :)
I need a really good chapter name any idea's what so ever would be much appreciated :)

K-mart; I don’t really like the store, it is boring and dreary!.
My mum, Demi and I were standing in-front of the cash register ready to purchase our items!. Demi was making an irritating noise which kind of sounded like a bubble bursting but louder!. Mum was losing it, she gave Demi one of her deathly stares and she shut up right away!. I decided to piss her off so when all was silent, I did my best at making the exact same sound, it worked!. Mum slowly turned her head towards me making me regret even thinking about it, I was ready for her to snap, but a musical laugh froze her on the spot, me as well!. We both turned to stare at the boy behind the cash register!. This was the first time I actually took notice of him!.
His hair was a beautiful mahogany colour; the chocolate brown eye’s started at me from under his dark lashes, his features weren’t perfect besides his nose which was very precise!. But these weren’t the reasons I couldn’t look away, his smile was breathtaking, I was close to hyperventilating, I couldn’t believe how incredibly amazing his smile was, I couldn’t really pick out why it was so beautiful and I was certain I would never forget it!.
I hadn’t realised that in those short seconds while I was staring at him I had finished my Boost Juice!.
“Demi, can you take this to the bin for me!? I asked!.
“Do it your-self!” She demanded!.
I looked down and sighed!. I started walking forward but I was surprised to feel a restraining hand on my shoulder!. I turned slightly to see who it was!. I was shocked to find it was the K-mart boys hand!. He gazed down at Demi and in a small voice said
“Common, be nice to your sister, take it to the bin for her!.” His voice was husky but comforting!. I stood there gapping at him, he winked at me!. Demi huffed and snatched it from my hands!.

When I get embarrassed I have a horrible way of showing it, I go bright red and of course this little reaction didn’t let me down!. I could feel my face getting hotter and hotter!. I looked down and tried to hide my face!.
“Thanks!.” I muttered
“No problem, happy to help,” he almost chirped!.
I blushed even deeper!. He laughed again, but this time it had a nervous edge to it!.
“Ok Tay, we have lots more to do!.” Mum interrupted
I nodded towards her “Right coming!.”
He smiled at me and said “Cya sweetie!.”
“Ummm!.!.bye!.” I said idiotically!.
I took one last glance at him!. He was fairly short and he didn’t look more than 15!.

When we were walking Mum started nudging me!.
“He was cute, I think he likes you!.”
“As if Mum, he was probably just being nice!.” I argued
“I don’t think so!. I’ve seen him there before!. He doesn’t seem to talk much, I’ve seen him with other girls as well, very pretty they were too, but he didn’t show any interest towards them, not like he did with you today!.” She rebuffed
“Mum, stop it please, have you looked at me lately, I’ve been getting uglier by the day, there is no way he could be possibly interested!” And I was certain about that!.
“Honey, stop putting your-self down, you are beautiful in every way possible and whoever doesn’t see that must be blind either that or they are morons!”
I knew she was just saying that because she felt obliged to!. So I tuned out after awhile!.
“Ohhh!.!.!.Ahh Mum!.!.!.did you get his name!? I asked trying to sound indifferent!.
But of course she saw though it!. “No I don’t think so!. You like him don’t you!”
“No way mum!” I answered horrified!.
“Tay don’t lie to your mother!.” She said in a stern, quite voice!.
“Mum!.!.!.I only think he is good looking!. How could I like him, I just met him and I will probably never see him again!. So what’s the point!?”
As I said this it depressed me!. It shouldn’t have!. I didn’t like feeling this way!.
“We will see!.” Mum interrupted my thoughts!. The way she said this made me feel uneasy!. It seemed like she had something planned!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You could call it Blind!. She mentions that people must be blind if they can't see her ugliness, yet she herself was blind to the boy's good looks!. You could maybe add something to a sentence at the end about having been so blind as to not notice his good looks!.

Or youcould call it K-Mart, since that's where they meet!.
Its good though, keep it up!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wanna read watever this is so when youve finished tell me title and m gonna go buy!.!.!. loved it email me

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Encounter in K-Mart

Its pretty good hope you carry on, are you putting it on a site like worthyofpublishing!.com so we can read more as you go along!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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" too good for me!.!."
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" who is that man !.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wanna keep reading!!!!!!not sure about a title!.!.!.!.k-mart hottie!. hehe i guess that's not exactly a good book chapter name!.umm!.!.!.!.
the first meeting isn't always the last!.(reword it probably)
Devious plans( refering to the mom!. but maybe that's more for a later chapter)
Uncomfortable feelings
helpful, cute!.!.!.!.need i say more!.
well I;m sure if those arn't good enough it might unblock your writers block just a tinge!. hope i helped!
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