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Question: I'm writing a story!? !?
here is the bare plot outline!. i haven't chosen my characters name yet but here are some substitutes!.

Book begins with Hannah questioning her life!. Tells about family, way of life, friends, enemies, running and crushes!. Is generally unhappy
First day of 10th grade Shannon is a *****- Meets Cara (who doesn’t like Jane)- Cara invites them to party- they politely decline but Luke goes
Hannah convinces Jane to spy on party- reluctantly agrees- they spy and are caught by drunk senior boys who think their freshman and try to force them to make out
An unknown boy saves them from this fate- He gives them rides home and lectures them about the parties
Next week- Hannah is promoted to 11th grade Chemistry- is partnered up with mystery boy- discovers his name is Oliver- also finds that Jane is tutoring Zak- hot guy- doesn’t really care because she likes her guy friend Luke
First cross country meet of the season- Hannah used to be child prodigy of the team now she’s not that great compared to kids moving up- is very frustrated- Does so- so at meet
Has a fight with mom after meet and storms out of the house- sits in park alone- Luke finds her- they talk and she realizes that she really likes him
Zak and Jane become a couple- sees less and less of Jane and more and more of Cara everyday- kind of sad about this- crushing hard on Luke
One day confesses her feeling to Luke- he says nothing and leaves- she is heartbroken
Next day at school he yells at her (Jane and Cara are no where to be found, only Oliver tells him to back off)- is a total jerk- and humiliates her by leaving with Shannon- she is thrown into depression
Next day Shannon and gang bully her to no end- Jane does stand up for her- tells mom about it but she doesn’t really care
Jane drags her to football game to cheer her up- Zak sees her and falls in “love”- starts flirting with her- Hannah is attracted to him but is guilty because he is dating her best friend
Zak’s flirting intensifies- Shannon tries to woo him and fails- Luke ignores her- Cara becomes a great friend suddenly- she tries to convince Hannah to go for him- Hannah refuses and is sickened by it
Sets Oliver on fire in lab and has one of her first real talks with him- discovers herself blushing- saves him from bullies- decides she likes Oliver- but never more as a friend- doesn’t want another “Luke” Situation- Luke has become Shannon’s BF and has become just like her
Loses at Homecoming Meet- they still win but treat her as an outsider
Homecoming game- Goes to see Zak’s football game and Luke and Oliver’s game- decides she’s still in love with Luke and is depressed by this!.
Talks to Luke and is rejected once again
Cara invites her to a HUGE party- declines
Has an argument with mom about running- decides to go and be reckless to spite her
Cara calls her and tells her where to go and more gossip about stuff- Oliver brings her to the party reluctantly
Once there- she VERY rudely ditches him and runs off to Zak- she wants to end his flirting once and for all- he is extrememly drunk when she gets there
Jane and Oliver find her- Zak grabs her and make out with her- Jane screams at them and Oliver just leaves
Heartbroken- she wanders around the party aimlessly- almost gets into a cat fight with Shannon- and discovers her hatred for Luke
She begins to feel extremely dizzy and sits down- remembers something from health class about date rape
Suddenly she feels like she can’t breath- runs outside- remembers never do that at a party- runs up hill
Sees shadowy figure stalking up the hill- thinks it’s a murderer- it’s really Oliver- he is angry with her but ends up also confessing his feelings
Upset and confused she runs away into the empty road- Shannon is speeding around in her new BMW- Oliver pushes her out of the way- both are knocked out but Oliver actually hit the car
Wakes up in hospital- Jane tells her Oliver’s alive but struggling- goes to see him and totally breaks down- tells him she loves him
The next day, he is getting better and Jane tells her about what happened after the accident- Shannon and Car tried to stop her from calling an ambulance but she still called 911- ambulances took Hannah and Oliver away while police raided party- Zak told her the truth- he kissed Hannah- Hannah thinks he wasn’t all bad
Oliver is better enough to see her- they hug and make up- decide to go out
One year later- they stand kissing at the school fountain- Promise each other to remain faithful- Hannah waves to him as he leaves for college and knows that both of them will keep the promise Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Whoa!.!.!.you'll need to learn to write succinctly if you want to write a book! A summary should summarise, not go into every confusing and often pointless detail!. I honestly tried to read but I was way too bamboozled to get passed something to do with 11th grade chemistry!.
Sorry, I know that's not very helpful!. Mostly I would suggest not having a lot of pointless things in your book!. Outline the main, central plot and focus on that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You need to make your book less complex or split it into a trilogy or something!. Make sure you don't put too much unnecessary melodrama, soap Opera Crap in there!. Keep it simple, relax,keep it super cool!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's kinda confusing, after the first sentence I was like whatt!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

less complexWww@QuestionHome@Com

ooooooooohh that sounds awesome!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Personally, it sounds really confusing!. I keep getting lost with all the names!. I know the names aren't final yet, but still, I am lost!. Hannah suddenly seems to disappear, and I just can't keep track of it all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com