I've written my first story ever, and I would like some opinions on how I can improve it!.
It is (slightly!?) dark!. And I rate it PG14, as I am fourteen!.
http://www!.quizilla!.com/stories/7993707/!.!.!.Thank-you for your time!. (:
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Your story is very good!.
I'm not even claustrophobic but when I got to the coffin part I was starting to feel a little short-winded!.
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WoW u got talent dude! you kept me on edge through that whole thing :]! i like thrillers like that!. Goodluck
ps thanx for replying to my q aswell about the speeding thing in Japan :]Www@QuestionHome@Com