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I'm describing a papaya I'm eating on an island (it's a long story)!. This is my description:

"It was unlike any other papaya I had ever tasted!. Like a waterfall of color, it swirled around my tounge and tickled my taste buds!."

That's all I have so far!. Does that sound good!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it is good!.!.!.very descriptive! Good luck to you in your writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Uhhh!.!.!.!.!.!. didn't you already ask this!? I'm so confused!. click here to see my answer to your other question which apparently you have two of!.!.!.!?

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