Would you review my Twilight fan fiction?

Question: Would you review my Twilight fan fiction!?

I have a fan fiction called "Fixing Dusk!." I'm trying to get it to reach more people, because, well, I kind of like the way it's shaping up!. I would love to hear what other people think about it and if they have any ideas to make it better!. So how could this be improved!?

http://www!.fanfiction!.net/s/4464489/1/Fi!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I have reviewed under the name Scorpia710, I think it's good which is surprising for Twilight fan fiction!. It looks like you have most of the story up though, maybe put some time in between updates (unless it's finished)!. Possible start a yahoo! group for ypur fanfiction!. A lot of sucessful fan fiction authors have done that!. While i'm not as sucessfull as most, I have created my own group, it fun but a responsibility!. You said you got married in you author note, so I'm sure you could handle it, :) Www@QuestionHome@Com