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Question: Can you write!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
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Ooooh, I love these things!! I hope to be a writer some day!. =)


Well, this is part of one story I wrote!. Oh, and by the way, this is all copyrighted on WritersCafe, so don't try anything!.



We were going to die!. I just knew it!. the FBI/CIA jet was purposely spiraling down towards our car!. Any second now, we would blow up in a fiery explosion of car and plane!. I hoped it would be a quick death, at least for Mariah!. She shouldn't suffer!.
Mariah!.
My dear, sweet, wife, Mariah!. She didn't deserve this!. It had all been my idea!. Right now, she was sobbing, in the trunk of the car, as the plane plummeted down towards our Jeep!. Anya's screaming wasn't helping anyone, and Ian and Nathan were praying!. Ha! Where was that going to get any of us!? I was pretty sure we were all going to Hell!. If there was even a Heaven and Hell, for that matter!. As far as I was concerned, I was the only one doing anything useful!. I was driving — no, flooring — the Jeep in a pitiful attempt to get away from one of those high-teq plane, but at least I would die trying!. The plane was twenty feet above us, and Mariah screamed!. I sped into a forest!. Ha! Like this will help!. The plane was getting closer by the second!. Speeding towards us, like an arrow towards a target!. Only, they were the arrow, and our car was the Bulls eye!.
Then, out of nowhere, appears this bright blue spot on the forest floor!. Thinking nothing of it, I drove right over!.
I was dead wrong!.
How much trouble could one little spot cause!? A lot!. We started to tremble, sink, and then shake uncontrollably!. It was the most frightening sensation I've ever been in!. We ended up underground!.
What we saw when we got down there was the most amazing thing that I've ever seen, in my whole life!. There was a castle, but not any castle!. Oh no!. This was amazing!. There were four towers, connected by walls the height of The Great Wall of China!. Then there were many, many towers, inside the walls, including a massive one, right in the middle!. I couldn't wait to see the inside!. I was so lost in my thoughts I found Mariah waving her hands in front of my face, trying to snap me out of it
"Damian! Earth to Damian! Come on, snap out of it!" she said!.
"Wha-What!? Oh!. Sorry!. It's just so, amazing!. The architecture!.!.!.!.the possibilities!. Think about it! Instead of ruling the world we could rule this! We need to kidnap people, to get them down here, of course!. And, we'll need servants, workers, people to get food, water, and such!.!.!.!.The possibilities!. Think about it, guys!" I rambled!.
"I know! That's what we were talking about, while you were!.!.!.!.thinking!.!.!.if that's possible!.!.!."
"Shut the Hell up, Ian! Damian is sooo much smarter on your best day, and on his worst!" Mariah said, defending me!.
I glared at him, and Nathan, who slapped him a high-five!. Anya was giggling!. I gave her a dirty look, too, and that shut her up!. I was obviously the highest in rank!. I had started this 'evil clan', actually!.

"Okay!. Everyone follow me!. We're going to look inside this!." I put my arm around Mariah's waist, and we walked inside!. The others were quick to follow!. We looked through the towers, and then walked over to the main one!. We got to the top to find out that it was a humongus throne room!. There were five thrones!. The largest two were in the middle!. Those would be Mariah's and mine!. Everyone seemed to understand that!. The other three were on different sides of those!. Everyone went to sit in their thrones!. Ian sat by Anya on one side, and Nathan on the other!. We started to plan how we would luer people down here!. We needed strong people, good cooks, and people with dicipline!. Tomorrow we would go up to the city and scope out the people, then decide who we would kidnap!.





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“Oh wow … oh geez,” I squealed in my head!. “That guy is so hot!”

I had just sighted a boy in my peripheral vision!. He had dark hair, pale skin and was tall!. That was all I could see!. You try looking sideways and still have clear sight of something!.

I turned my head to my right where the guy was standing!. I tried to do it casually, as if to suddenly look around at my surroundings!.

It turned out to be a little old lady in a puffy purple jacket with a mosaic beanie, hunching over against the wind and carrying green eco-friendly shopping bags!. With her tufts of white hair sticking out from the side of her head, how could I have ever imagined it to be dark hair in a sexy cut!?!

I blushed at my stupidity and wasn’t ungrateful when the little man flashed green and waved the crowd that needed to cross safely over to the other side of the street!.

I looked back to see the little lady shuffle off out of view into a pharmacist!.

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“I can't take it anymore Mom,” I screamed!. “It's too much! I have to go!. NOW!”
I whipped the door closed behind me with a flick of my wrist, and listened to the latch snap into place and the door clunk against it's frame as I stormed into my room!. I stomped to my bed and threw myself down with all the force I could muster!. I flopped down onto the pillows and kicked the crumpled sheet by my feet out of my way!. Only now did I wish I had made my bed today, just so I could hide under the covers and let it all out!.
Instead I let the tears slide down my face as I gasped for air like a member of the Titanic who had neglected to learn how to swim because of their confidence in the “unsinkable ship”!. I could feel the fury at some unidentified force rising inside me, and I let it take over!. It wasn't worth the fight these days!. The anger was part of me now; I couldn't seem to get rid of it!.
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I walked up the steps to her school bus, giving the bus driver my money!.
“Return please,” I said!.
The bus driver ripped off a ticket and passed it to me!.Making my way down the bus aisle, I looked at the faces of people, I stopped at a vacant seat and sat down!.I turned my Ipod on a little softer, so others couldn’t hear it and stared out the window!.
The next stop was where my friend Trinity would get on the bus!. People would never of guessed that Trinity and I would be friends, we are so different! I was into freedom of speech, and had my won point of view on everything!. While Trinity seemed to follow the crowd and do as they did - like a monkey, hehe!.
Our clothing sense was also very different!. I wore a lot of blacks, purples and greens, while Trinity wore a lot of pink and yellow!. We both liked blue though, so we had that in common! And then, don’t get me started on hair! I had straight brown hair with bangs covering one eye, while Trinity had shoulder length blonde hair, cut like Nicole Richies’ in 2006!.
I guess if you want to get into the whole ‘label’ section, I was a punk and Trinity was a prep!.
“Hey Avril!” Came a voice from next to me!.
I whirled around and saw Trinity standing there!.
“Hey Trin!” I replied, turning off my Ipod and putting it in my bag!.
Trinity sat down next to me!.
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She spotted Miguel, seated at the far end of the room with a crowd of friends!. They were animated, talking loudly to make themselves heard, gesturing to emphasize some point or other!. She waved to catch his attention and he beckoned her over as soon as he saw her!.

She threaded her way through the crush!. A hand grasped her bottom!. She spun, and glared!. A grin, a shrug, a good-looking guy, dark curly hair, six-footer!. Maybe he thought she should feel flattered!. The mood she was in she felt more like flattening the bastard!.

More cologne than alcohol hung in the fug; a gaggle of girls shrieked over the crash of songs, nurtured flashy drinks!. One or two men were with them, smiling, saying nothing, older, wearing quiet clothes!. Escorts and the escorted!?

"Jenny!" Miguel stood and greeted her, kissing her on both cheeks!. "Hey, why the long face!? You don't look like someone who's come into all that money!." He had to shout to make himself heard above the noise, and held her at arm's length to study her!. "You look worried!. What problems have you got now!?"

"I don't have problems!."

"With the amount of money you've come into, I should think not!."

It was meant to be funny because he smiled but she wasn't in the mood!. She said testily, "I'm trying to get my head around things!."
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I feel his eyes on me, alien eyes, so blue and brilliant!. They stole the breath from my lungs, and the warmth from my heart!. I can honestly say that I don’t know if I love the man or if I hate him!. If what I feel is loathing or desire!. But he has made me feel, and that, if nothing else, has tied me to him!.

Indebted, really, is the word, and so I move forward!. Taking a deep breath and leaping, into the deep blue and frightening unknown!. A thousand thoughts swirl in my mind!. I can’t believe I am doing this, it is stupid, I am stupid!. But I must do it, I long to feel his arms around me again!.

I am falling!.
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Once there was a king!.
He died!.
The end!.

Well actually I stole that idea from someone else!. Sorry!. Maybe something different!?


“Kaden!”
He kept walking, showing absolutely no sign that he had heard her, even though everyone else within hearing distance on both sides of the street had turned to look at her disapprovingly!. She didn’t care!. In fact, she was furious!. At herself, at him, and the whole stupid mess they had been thrown into!.
Growling, she slammed the car door shut and ran to catch up to him, falling in step at his side!. He sped up his pace, trying to lose her, but she matched it determinedly!. He wasn’t walking away from his problems this time!.
“Look, I gave you what you wanted, now get off my back!” he snapped viciously, his voice low and threatening!. She couldn’t help noticing that he looked away from her as he said this, his eyes ever watching their surroundings!.
“Oh sure, like you ever do anything I ask you to do!.”
The vampire stopped so abruptly that Anri blew past several steps before realizing that he had stopped!. Her face tinged slightly with the flush of embarrassment and increasing anger, she backtracked and whirled to face him, arms on hips and eyes narrowed!. His expression may as well have been a mirrored image of her own!.
"What is your problem!?" she demanded furiously!. "I'm trying to help you! I'm trying to get you out of the Syndicate, a spot in the Alliance! Didn't you say that your loyalty to the Syndicate died with Louis!? Didn't you say you wanted out!?"
He ground his teeth in frustration, and she could see him clenching his fists in his jacket pocket!. But she didn't back down!. She hadn't made it this far in life by running away from every possible sign of hostility!.
"Look!.!.!.what do you think Raebon and the others will think of me!?" he finally said at last, his voice deadly soft!. "After all I've done!.!.!.I mean, I kidnapped you, handed you over to a psychopath vampire who wanted to annihilate everything you knew and loved, and oh yeah, I'm the reason my dad and your mom are both dead!. Don't you get that!? They're dead!. They're mistakes I can't undo--ones not even you, with all your little Paradox time powers!.!.!.you won't even undo them! You can't!. There's nothing you can do to change it all, and because of that everyone hates me!. Just let me walk away Anri!. Walk away from this like you walked away from that night on the rooftop three years ago!."
"We both walked away from that," she snapped!. "BOTH of us!. And a part of both of us died on that rooftop!. Something that should have died a long time ago!"
Yeah, and his name was Louis," muttered Kaden!.
Anri stopped in mid sentence and stared!. "You're actually making a joke at a time like this!?"
The vampire hesitated, then sighed and shook his head as if disbelieving he had actually said what he had said!.
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