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Question: Is this a good idea for a story!? !?
My book is about a high school girl who is part vampire!. She's more human then vampire!. So her powers and fangs are not that of a full vampire!. Her parents are millionaires but are never home so she and her 3 friends pretty much get the mansion to themselves!. Anyway, she hears of a plot from 2 full vampires and they are going to start a war between the humans and them!. And the girl has to train herself to use her powers and defeat the leader of the vampire clan which attacks her city!. Does it sound like a good idea!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
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yeah sounds really good!. i would read up on some good horror vampire novels to get more of a realistic fighting effect (if your doing that) I just finished reading i am legend (the book)!. and that is a good story to get you going!. Good luck on your book!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It sounds like Buffy the Vampire Slayer multiplied by Lipstick Jungle divided by Mean Girls!. You need to explain why she's only 1/4 vampire and why 2 full vampires want to conspire to kill her!. Did she accidently stumble upon something she shouldn't have!? I don't know!? Anyways, you need to explain the motives of the characters, it sounds like an eye-candy thriller!. You'll probably get a B!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
sure it does!. Maybe she falls in love with a human too!. There alot you can do to the sotry!. Try not to make it resemble buffy too much however!.
It is very hard to write a story, even a short story!. I tried once, and even tried to make it into a graphic novel!.!.!.comic book type!. And that was even harder!.
ps your avatiar is very pretty!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah pretty good up to the part about attacking the city and powers!. I'd prefer a love story or something but it's good=DWww@QuestionHome@Com
I don't know!.
Do you think you can pull it off by not making it sound cheesy and juvenile like most of the vampire stories!?
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I hate how so many young girls wish to write about vampires because of SM, but this doesn't sound too much like her writing, so yes, sounds good!
-LivvyWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, it sounds interesting!. Let that imagination of yours go and get it done!. Let us know when it's finished!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its good but don't count your chicken before they are hatched!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it sounds like a good idea but trying to span it out might be a problemWww@QuestionHome@Com