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Question: What kind of twist can i add to my short film !?
I'm writing a short film and i wanted it to be about a homeless
guy who lives on the street,has nothing to live for but wants to
better himself , part of him tells himself he can do it and the other
part says he cant!.

I wanna add a certain twist to it but i don't know what exactly!.
Or should i just try and make up another story!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Knowing how it is to be in a down and out position like your featured character!. You need to build up the persons downfall or place it in your film some how so that viewers can relate to the homeless character!. A good twist would be your character saving a persons life and getting media attention!. From there he becomes a local hero and people offer him jobs in his past trade (painter,carpenter, mechanic ect!.) that then becomes a target for racial discrimination!. You can fill in the rest of the story!.!.!. He lost his job/family cause of a major catastrophe example would be drinking, gambling, hurricane, earthquake things of that nature!. People dislike him cause of his race, religion or sexual preference!. Maybe he falls in love with someone and it becomes an issue!.!.!. Hope this helpedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent choice of subject!. I think you already have a twist!. the difficulties of getting out of the street for a homeless person is the turn around and quite difficult!. That could be your twist!.

You can also have other individuals involved in his/her life that can put a twist on your story!. They could be other homeless individuals who have not yet succeeded in their goal of improving their lives!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you should make it that hes already rich but he has some sort of brain disease or accident and hes been in a comma hallucinating the whole time!. hes been a schtickler (aka really cheap stinggy guy, kinda scruge-ish i guess) his whole life but his faithful wife has stuck with him the whole 2 years hes been in a comma!. when he comes out he REALLY appreciates his wealth and turns over a new leaf!. kinda cliche i know, but you can work with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

have him start to slowly better him self but as he is doing this he starts remembering things and have him go to a rock or somethign and look under it and find a key with a note that has a house adress and when he goes there it is his house and everything because he worked for the goverment and got fired and brain washed or somethingWww@QuestionHome@Com

How about a fairy godmother waving a wand and this homeless person lives in a castle happily ever After, married to someone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

twist is that he was actually a very rich guy, looking for a wife who didnt want him for his money but his qualities as a person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a drunk Lindsay lohan rapes him!.



possibly a true story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would need more information on the chractor and his history and the events taking place to give you an idea for a twistWww@QuestionHome@Com

Are you looking for reality!.!.!. or can u include fantasy!? how about adding up a genie part, like he gets that lamp with a genie and then genie fulfils all his dreams ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

the best way to better himself is to help someone who is worse off than he is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com