Another peom is it good?

Question: Another peom is it good!?

be honest if its good

ticking time

flowers bloom
then they die

life resumes
time ticks by

people grow old
say goodbye

kids never stay young
life takes them then they ask why

life cicles again and again
no one impotent ever wins!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i like it!. i wish i had ur talent w/ writing poems!. all of the poems tht i write out always end up depressing!. good job!. keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like your poem!. its understandable to everyone!. its moving but not depressing!. i like it alot!. Www@QuestionHome@Com