Question: Do these count as poems!?
I've never really writen poetry but I write uh 'stuff' whenever I need to to make me feel better!. I don't even know if this counts for poetry or if it even sounds good at all!. I write for myself anyway, noone's ever read my 'crap'!. Let me know what you think or what I could do!. PLEASE productive semi-nice answers thank you!.
Eyes of curiosity gazing, standing back in complete admiration!.
Listening as no listener has ever heard before!.
Understanding pieces scatter and glue themselves back together !.
Don’t need to touch just feel;
Don’t need to talk just tell!.
Worries subside, affliction apart
Lies no more the Soul’s start!.
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Expression is something that has to be forced out of the soul!.
A constant feeling of words, ideas, and teachings scrambling through the head all at once!.
One is saying pick me but which one!? Can’t decide on which ones to accept and which to dismiss!.
A word, so many words, mean what you say buy what you mean!.
Shut up!.
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Burry my head, watch if cascade down!.
Hate, confusion, hate
Thinking makes vomit, sickness decay
Connection, plug into anything apart of the whole!.
Divulge all, discontinue the system
Slicing contains empty heat
Wall what wall!? It’s better than nothing at all!.
Lift my head to see falling trees
There’s nothing there but deterioration!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I write a lot of poetry, myself!. These are not considered poems, in my point of view!.!. but they are good, and they sound good when written down!. If you are looking to write poetry, try making them longer, with four lines a paragraph, or maybe five, rhyming every other word, or every two or three words!. That is my advice, seeing as I seem to know a lot about poetry, and everyone thinks I write well!.!.
Here is one of mine, so that you can look off of it, and know how to set it up!.
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In the back of my mind,
I'm searching for the final blow,
I'm leaving you behind,
But I don't know how to go,
About putting you in the past,
And throwing you away,
Because it happened so fast,
And I think of you all day,
Where I went wrong,
I may never know,
I waited so long,
But we never did grow,
So now I'm letting you be,
It is time to move on,
Because you never loved me,
And the thought of that is gone,
So now I say goodbye,
Putting you in my past,
All along, this big lie,
I knew it wouldn't last!.
I hope this helps you, you seem to have talent, you just need to learn how to put it to good use :) good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like poetry to me!. I liked them too!. Interesting and easy to read!. I also thought it would sound really cool with someone saying them with bongo drums in the background!. Like it was a poetry club or something!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, anything can be poetry!
And you seem to have talent!.
Keep writing!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com