I was thinking of calling it Killer of Death!.!.!.!.its just the general outline!.!.ITS a little long but could you please read it and give your opinion!? thanks a lot!
Andre has always been followed by death!. It started when he was in elementary school, where he was bullied by Marcus Jones, a big older boy who loved picking on kids!. One day, Andre pictured in his mind Marcus being brutally hurt and dying!. Later that day, Marcus dies when he falls after slipping on some spilled milk in the cafeteria and shatters his jaw and rupturing his brain!. And after that, Andre’s parents died during the same day, both in separate store robberies!. He grows up very disturbed, but very smart!. He becomes a writer, and on the side he practices martial arts!. Every woman he ever came to love would eventually be killed in some way, all of his friends, killed as well!. So he cut himself away from the world, staying inside to write, never coming in contact with anyone!. But then he is struck with pure love by a woman named Sandra!. He cautiously befriends her, then after several years of love without death, he marries her!. They were married for five years!. He had not witnessed death for nearly nine years!. And then Sandra was killed when their car careened into the woods!. A tree branch had broken the window and severed her neck!. But Andre was in the car too!. He was unhurt!. At Sandra’s funeral he spots a man in a black suit across the street smiling at him, and when thunder sounds above his image flashes for a second to that of the grim reaper, clothed in a black robe and hood and holding a scythe!. Then he is the man again!. He disappears!. After the funeral Andre looks for him, and finds him near his wife’s grave hours later!. He goes to confront him, but a truck blocks the road!. When it passes, the man is gone!. That night, he is driving home when a multicar crash happens in front of him!. All of the drivers die!. At around midnight he drives to the graveyard and starts screaming into the sky, “Death! I know it was you today! Why do you haunt me! WHY!?” There is a cool breeze, and then the wind stops, and the world becomes silent!. A voice comes into Andre’s head and says that he will always be haunted by death!. If he wanted to see him again, then he would need to kill somebody!. Andre vows that he will kill death!. He will kill the grim reaper!. He goes home, and the next day he goes to an old bookshop owner at the corner of a street!. He remembers him from when he was a kid; he thought he was crazy believing in all sorts of odd things like monsters and such!. He asks him if it was possible to kill the grim reaper!. The man says that he can only be killed when you are about to die, when you are on the brink, and then when death is about to finish you, you must burn him with fire!. Andre goes to a cliff near the river and jumps, and lands on the rocks below!. His legs break and his face is smashed!. He is in so much pain!. Then he sees the man in black, his image flashing back and forth from the man to the grim reaper!. He raises his scythe, and then Andre pulls out oil and squirts it onto death, and then shoots him!. Death catches fire, and falls into the water!. He is dead!. Andre smiles and passes out, thinking he died!. Then he wakes up the next morning!. His legs are healed, and his face is fine!. He sees the scythe on the ground!. He picks it up!. Power shoots through him, and he is possessed for a split second by the voice of death!. Then he is back to normal!. He throws the scythe into the river!. He leaves!. Several days later he strikes success with one of his books!. Within days it is on the bestseller list!. His life seems to be going good, and then it happened!. On the news there is a story about how a scythe was found washed ashore downtown, with a dead body lying next to it!. He had been killed when he touched it!. Andre goes to the scene and grabs the scythe, it doesn’t kill him!. He keeps it, and while it is in his house he has strange powers!. He cannot die!. He can see the life inside of people, and in their blood he can see when they are going to die!. He can make anybody die whenever he wants!. Whenever he looks into the mirror, he sees himself, and then he sees the grim reaper!. He became Death!. He becomes possessed with the power!. He becomes a criminal, stealing money and killing people!. He lives for almost a hundred years, still looking as if he were thirty!. He kills off a woman on a train one day!. That night he hears a man calling his name!. He goes to him!. It is a young man in a graveyard over his dead wife’s grave!. He threatens that he will kill him!. Andre laughs!. Soon the young man named Chris cuts himself and forces death to come to him!. They fight, and then Andre is killed!. Chris goes to the scythe, and is about to pick it up, then he is called by a policeman, and leaves!. The next day, the scythe mysteriously appears in his house!. He goes over to it and picks it up!. The power shoots through him, and he smiles wickedly!. His face darkens, and he waWww@QuestionHome@Com