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Position:Home>Books & Authors> Do you like this short poem?Question: Do you like this short poem!? Would Live in Your Love I would live in your love as the sea-grasses live in the sea, Borne up by each wave as it passes, drawn down by each wave that recedes; I would empty my soul of the dreams that have gathered in me, I would beat with your heart as it beats, I would follow your soul as it leads!. ThankyouWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very sweet poem!. Makes me want to drive to the beach!. LOL!. = )Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes is answer for the unsure Unsure about certainty Unsure about choice unsure about like!. Positive will do better and make you a better letter on which no one but you and your mind can write on, not even ink!. It is brilliant, like the sparks of the feeling of love!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com So you'd be a subservient slave!? That's what I get from this poem!. "I would empty my soul of the dreams that have gathered in me", you would give away all of your dreams to be in their presence!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice piece of poetry!.Presenting emotions that are guided by love like the sea-grasses by the tide!.Comparing in that way gives high quality in poems!. Regards, Gentlecook Lev!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes I do like that short poem!. I think you should write some more and make a website!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like your short poem a lot,I Love you too babe!!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I really like it! Keep writing more poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com very nice!. I like the beach imagery you used a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it, a perfect 10Www@QuestionHome@Com Not that much!. It's not the greatest ever!. Www@QuestionHome@Com its nice :0Www@QuestionHome@Com made me cry, so yesWww@QuestionHome@Com it is cute ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com not badWww@QuestionHome@Com yes its really good sentimental keep up the good work xWww@QuestionHome@Com I'm not one for love poetry but it's good, nice sentiment!. ape!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |