I am going to give you the frst chapter and half of the second one
I need you to tell me if you like it and the quality of the writing
I am sorry about the spelling
Chapter 1
"One more block",I rambled on almost drooling with excitment!.
Amanda's alchohol was all that my mind was on!.I was only thirteen but after being abandoned be both parents and left to die on the steps of an old church I picked up alittle problem with vodka!.To my internal liking I picked up a twelve year old who wanted so bad to get wasted with me!.It was so much more fun with a partner!.There were no parents around so no worring about getting caught and put into that ocward situation where while you were already trashed and you had to reach into the back of your mind for an exscuse to why you were sweating and wobbly!.Not to brag but I was the best at getting out of trouble!.
My partner in crime was Jade!.She was overweight but it looked good on her!.She had long dirty blonde hair!.She had big brown eyes that in some way defined her!.Of corse we had to have a responsible person to help us out but it just happened that it was a very uptight fourteen year old!.His name was Billy!. He wouldn't shut up about why this was a bad idea and how stupid we were being!.Out of all the people that survived I was stuck with him!.We tried to get rid of him but he was afriad of being alone it seemed!.
Jade was still alittle out of it because she knew her parents and she loved them!.I on the other had seen nor heard from my parents in over five years years!.I had been living on the streets before this and sometimes I slept in abandoned buildings!.I had no one and cared for no one!.Not once has a hand ever reached out to help me up!.
Jade's face lit up when the store came into view!."Melanie were're here",she yelled!.I nodded!.
I bent over and grabbed a good sized rock!.The double doors in the beggining of the achohol store had a sheet of glass from the top of the red door down to the middle!.This wasn't a very appitizing building if you saw just the outside but what it held on the inside made it all worth while!.
I perfectly aimed the stone at the glass while standing back a couple feet and threw it with all my might!.I might have joined the softball team if I had the chance!.I decided to scronge for food in a dumpster instead!.
As I exspected the glass shattered to the ground!.I scurried over to the door and reached my hand in!.I was so exstatic I didn't even feel the shard of glass that percied my arm as I turned the lock and the door popped open!.I raced in!.This store happened to be huge so there was so many choices!.
I grabbed one of the shot glasses sold up front!.I spotted a bottle of vodka mixed with green apple flavering!.I popped it open and poured myself a shot and chugged!.I walked up to the front of the store,grabbed another shot glass,filled it up,and handed it to Jade!.
To my suprise she hesitated!.She must be new at this!.
"Oh my god it's been too long",I said as I set the shot glass down and just drank out of the bottle!.I started drinkin at about eleven!.At first it burned so bad but after a while I got used to it and now I am like this!.This meaning a drunk,well when I could get my hands on it!.It wasn't always easy in my situation!.I crashed every party I could find!.It was mostly teenagers throwing a party when thier parents weren't home!.
Billy grabbed a 2 liter of soda and started drinking that!.The store was in the middle of no where!.We hadn't had anything to eat or drink all day and it was about 1 o clock pm!.
The storeclerk knew me and sometimes gives me some free samples!.She was nineteen and her boss was never there so we just bonded!.
Jade stuck out her tounge and said"wow"!.I thought she was done but she held out the shot glass and motioned to fill it up!.
I took another shot and another and another!.I was buzzed at that point!. Jade had just as much so she was too!.For those of you who have never exspericed the joy of the feeling achohol gives you!.One you have no idea what you are missing and two being buzzed I wasn't out of touch with reality!.I just got dissy when I stood up!.I decided to stop for now!.I loved the feeling you got but I hate the hangover!.
All of our heads swung around when we hear a loud screeching coming from outside!.
CHAPTER 2
"What the hell is that",I yelled from the back of the store to Billy!.I knew it was bad when Billy's jaw fell from it's normal sneer!.
"Get down",was all heard before all the pressure hit me and I was thrown into the self of tequila!.The bootles shattered and peirced my skin!.To make matters worse the achohol poured onto the cuts!.That was the least of my problems!.I slowly got up and ran to Jade who was now crying!.I threw my self on her and cradled our heads!.
The winds pulled us and pushed us but luckily we stayed on the ground!.No actally we were lucky this building was still intacted!.
It seemed almost unaurthadox to use the word lucky!.
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