Her name is Emma or Alex( I can't decide!. Need help on that)
last name is Rich( can you think of a better one to fit her!? she is not actually rich, it is just a name I made up on the spot when I was writing my story!.
Appearance: slightly wavy brown hair
normal sized body for an 18 year old
light tan skin tone
slightly chubby cheeks
electric blue eyes( needed for plot)
Strengths: slightly faster at running than average girls, but not the fastest
above average smarts due to reading alot, but no where close to genius
always lots of determination
flaws: overprotective of family
very sarcastic- I think that is a flaw!.!.!.
can't ever let go of a lose
sort of shy, but not a whole lot
some times when no one is expecting it, she has a temper tantrum, but very rarely
family members: Parents- richard Rich and Marie Rich( both die at beginning of book)
Sarah- sister- age 13
Vanessa and Samantha- twins at age 10
Eric- brother at age 8
These characters have similar appearances as Emma (or Alex), but varying personalities
Is this character a Mary- Sue!? Can you help improve her to make her more realistic!?
Oh, one more question!. Isn't Harry Potter sort of a Gary- Sue, because he is like good at almost everything!? Thanks for your helpWww@QuestionHome@Com