Tell me what you think of these names for my book?

Question: Tell me what you think of these names for my book!?

PEOPLE
Ambros Luther Caerellius
Rozalia Aila Cantaber
Zardra Athlossine
Bruscious Cantaber
Camlyn Ilina Aurelianus
Garran
Erikkaiy Nolus
Verrulus Ryder
Marsyas Rune
Allulah Tullius

PLACES
Hazel Halls
Rosulaura
Ana Syltia
LangidrikWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like them, but to me it sounds like if your story is what i think it will be like then someone will probably sue you for copyright infringement!. Now, that being said, I don't want to get you down - that's the last thing I want to do - but you have to assume the possibility that your novel might parallel to other fantasy novels a little too close!. I tell this to a lot of people who call themselves writing their first fantasy novel (I am in the process of finishing my first one - 153,614 words), and I hope that some of them at least give my advice some thought!. Try to stay away from cliche`s at any cost!. Now, I'm not saying that everything you come up with in the book will be completely original because it is impossible to create fiction without borrowing from something else, but don't make it obvious that you were copying notes!. Make it your own, and you'll be glad you did!. I like your names, but unless youir story has interesting elements, the quality of the names won't matter very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

They're alright!. I'm guessing this book has to do with magic, or something similar to that!? Just because that one person has the last name Rune!.

Well anyways, remember you want your readers to be able to actually remember the names!. Just looking at these, I know I can't pronounce half of them!.

Good luck!.
Love always,
PippaWww@QuestionHome@Com

If it's a fantasy book, they sound fantastic! If not, they sound a bit far fetched, if not too eloquent!. VERY pretty though!. I love them!.

?Graceful Little Alice?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It kind of sounds like you are trying to hard to make up names!. Names don't have to be so Fancy!.!.!. but I did like the name Marsyas Rune!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great!.!.i think its fantasy am i right!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com