What do you think about my Poem.???

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Question:

Lost

I feel like nothing!.
like open space in the sky!.
no purpose!.
no life!.
no reason!.
no understandence of who, why or what i am!.

No one could possibly no how i feel at this point
just want out,
to make a break threw!.
and fly away with you!.

I cry but tears never fix the problems!.
feeling alone, but surrounded by people who love me!.

Im a lost soul in a crowd
a lost heart
a lost mind!.

I feel so misplaced
Lost in the world!.

But not my time!.
Not my tag!.
and not so willing!.

Crazy thoughts inside my head!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think it's very good!. The poem obviously shows true thought and emotion at a specific point but doesn't get to in depth to what it is!. you specify that it is you saying it and it is for your emotions but you don't alienate the readers which kept at least me interested!. it's not necessarily a poem to keep frame and keep on the bedroom wall but something that relates to some at shadowed times in their life!. i think this is why i like it so much!. well done!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a well thought out poem!. I don't know if you meant to make the spelling/word errors or if they were accidents, but those kind of took me out of the poem!. If they were fixed I would personally like it better, but overall, great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very expressive, heartfelt, and well thought out!.

Wonderful work! There is just so much emotion!.!.!.
I loved it!. Good job!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com