Is my story good plz answer

Question: Is my story good plz answer

people ask me stuff i don't like
There was a pregnant woman named alyssa she was only 19 years old she needed to finish college but she got pregnant and she dropped out 9 months later her baby was born it was a baby boy named tommy he was a smart kid when he turned 6 he was wright novels at 10 he finished college at 20 he was the smartest person in the world
that all i have so far if you answer is good you get 10 pointsWww@QuestionHome@Com

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add more details like what did the mother look like!?
what did the baby look like!? Here try something like this!.!.!.

The mother was beautiful her skin was pale!.when she walked into a room you could not help but to stare!.her eyes were a beautiful light blue that told the story of her past!.

Something like that should make it more interesting! :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

One idea:

Having the character in the story being 'the best' at something is usually a literary turn off, not to mention a huge security risk for the character at all times!. As the smartest man on earth, people of lesser character may be at all times trying to kidnap him for nefarious planning, robberies, hacking, etc!. Certainly he could outsmart some of them, but all of them all the time!? It would make even the most brainy burn out eventually!.

Otherwise, not a bad premise, not overly written on!. Please give him a good dad, though, or else he'll be unbalanced and eventually mired in depression!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

r u like 10 or summat coz my younger sister whoes 8 could write a better story than thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it but u should put like lots of drama in it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com