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Question: How old do you think the person who wrote this (ME) IS!?
My story begins in london where i had been born and raised in an old house that my familly has inherated !.
The house i live in is georgeous and has a great lake view !.i have huge problumes in this house,
at night i can hear heavy foot steps up in the attic and the downstairs computer's keyboard being tapped over and over ,i feel as if a someone is watching me wating to attack at the right instant! !.Iam easily scared so i would never have the courage to go check out what's happening , so i lay in bed terrified just watting for morning time to come!.
I also have an even bigger problume ,I can feel the spirits around me as they whisper my name "emily!emily! help us!"!.Ialso felt the same thing at my old house but those spirits were very friendly and peaceful ,just worried about their familly!.In thishouse i feel something even darker and heavier !.Both my parents have passed away this year from a freak car accident,i don't know why but i feel that my mom is content and okay but my dad's spirit is still in the house !.Ihave to sleep!but i can never sleep at the feeling of something terrifying in this house!and i am afraid of what they will show me !.I have consaulted a therapist but it turns out that i am normal !.!.!.not crazy ,Ican even read my dreams and take them very seriously, they are like immortal visions!. iam scared of what they will tell me, I feel like they are trying to tell me something and are following me around but subconciously I dont want to know!. I love helping people and animals in anyway I can and have seen some very horrible things, but I cant handle whatever it is they want to tell me!. What can I do!? i have asked this question many times to different people especially my gurdian jane but nobody seems to understand !.I feel that they are demons so i pray to jesus "save my soul o lord!"
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12, 13!. Use MS Word to do a spell check - that will help!. :) Good luck! Www@QuestionHome@Com
12 or so!. You should try using a spell-checker, and try to use more active verbs- avoid "had been born" change to "was born," and maybe try to use other verbs than feel, feeling, etc!.
best of luck, you're off to a good start! :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
12, because it uses 'I' as a start for the story a lot and people under 13 always like that!. I don't know why, It would work as a first of like five rough drafts!. Haha!. The story's interesting enough though!.
Edit: My story begins in London where i was born and raised in an old house that my family inherited !.(You probably shouldn't start this like this, but like this -->)
I looked out of my window from the big ancient house, my family inherited, and watched the still water on the lake!. I have huge problems in this house,
at night you can hear heavy foot steps up in the attic and the downstairs computer's keyboard being tapped over and over, I feel as if a someone is watching me waiting to attack at the right instant! I am extremely paranoid so i would never go see what's happening , so i lay in bed terrified just waiting for morning time to come!.
However the biggest problem is that I can feel the spirits around me as they whisper my name "Emily! Emily! Help us!"!.I felt a similar feeling at my old house but those spirits were very friendly and peaceful, worried about their family!.In this house i feel something even darker and heavier!. My parents have passed away this year from a freak car accident,i don't know why but i feel that my mom is content and fine, but my dad's spirit is still in the house !.I have to sleep, but i can never sleep at the feeling of something terrifying in this house,and i am afraid of what they will show me!.I have consulted a therapist but it turns out that i am normal!.!.!.not crazy ,I even read my dreams and take them very seriously, they are like immortal visions!. I am scared of what they will tell me, I feel like they are trying to tell me something and are following me around but subconsciously I don't want to know!. I love helping people and animals in anyway I can and have seen some very horrible things, but I cant handle whatever it is they want to tell me!. What can I do!? i have asked this question many times to different people especially my guardian Jane but nobody seems to understand !.I feel that they are demons, or evil spirits, so i pray to Jesus "save my soul, oh lord!" (well this is how I would write it, you don't have to, just trying to help)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wel it's an OK story but you can't really tell with just an introduction!. A good few spelling mistakes and very drawn out, I'd say somebody quite young!. You should write more because it is a good start to a very interesting storyWww@QuestionHome@Com
I would say about 12-14!
good ideas, try to improve your spelling & grammar so you can be a better writer by the time you have reached an older age!.
keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
10 or 11!.!.
too many spelling mistakes and watch the grammar!. Proofread, girl!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
12!. I just saw this in a resolved question that you asked!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
about 12 or 13 years
spelling mistakesWww@QuestionHome@Com
I would say 13 or 14 by looking at the spelling mistakes! Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com
11, 12 maybe 13!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You want the truth!?
8 years oldWww@QuestionHome@Com
No older than 5!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
13Www@QuestionHome@Com
15Www@QuestionHome@Com
10-13Www@QuestionHome@Com
10~12!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
My guess is you're somewhere in the 10-13 range!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
lol you're probably in your 20s or 30s!. Even some adults can't spell perfectly!. Microsoft Word has a spell checker that you can use, i wouldn't worry too much about it!. The story sounds interesting, nonetheless!.
EDIT: Haha, ok i take that back!. You are 12 years old because you posted the same story already, and resolved it:
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com