Question Home

Position:Home>Books & Authors> Do you think this is a good plot for a book?


Question: Do you think this is a good plot for a book!?
I'm writing a book so here's the plot:
One day Damien Peterson walks out of a convenient store getting ready for his 12 year old sons ball game!. But just after he walked out of the convienent store he dissapeared!. Just like that! The investegaters thought that he was kidnapped!. The mother was held as the kidnapper intil further notice!. Then mnths later the 12 year old boy dissapears!. So the police arrest the mother because she was the only one who could of done that!. But 2 months after she was arrested the investegators found some clues that might lead to where the two missing people could be, so the mother was released!. She also figured out she was pregnant afterwards!. She didn't think she could take care of a baby after what she's been through!. So once the baby was born it was going to be sent to a foster home until she was calm enough to have him back!. The new baby was named Mark Peterson!.
TWELVE YEARS LATER!.!.!.
Mark has settled of the name Mark Clarkson!. That's his foster parents last names!. Mark is more like a new shy funny one of his new school!. He just went on to 7th grade!. He met new kids and is a happy kid!.!.!. until he learns that his father was kidnapped!. And he discovers that he had a brother that was kidnapped too!. Mark found this out because He was sent to his moms house for the weekend and Mark found thi journal in moms bedroom!. That's how he discovers it!.
So in the book Mark discovers deep and dark things about his past and at the end of the book he discovers clues that leads him to where his father and brother is!. I plan on to make this a series!. I just thought of this plot yesterday so i don't have very much done, but hey i just want you guys to think you could be hooked on the series!.

Margaret Peterson Haddix inspried me to make a suspenful series!. After reading The Shadow Children Series and Double Identity and alot of other of her books i decided to make a book of my own!. Some of this also inspired me from her new series called The Missing!. I just read Found and it was GREAT!!!!!!! answer as soon as possible!. I want to know what you thinnk of it!!!!!!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
So far I think it's really good!. Just make sure that your series doesn't turn out too much like the books you are inspired by, like a knock-off version of it, that happens to me when I'm writting sometimes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't pay attention to Goofy!. I think it sounds really good!. I'd read it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

No it sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com