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Question: This is the synopsis of the first book of my juvenile fantasy series!.!.what do u tink of it!?
its about a boy named noor who's a mathematics genius!.!.after the mysterious murder of his father ,noor's mother get married to bank manager named zidan,and she sends noor to an orphanage during her honeymoon with zidan!.!.which will last 3 months!.!.but at the orphanage noor finds horrible secrets!.!.!.!.every one inside this orphanage is accustomed to magical creatures that go around!.!.!.!.!.magical equations that unlock secret doors!.!.but no one is better with the math part more than noor,after he learns math magic from sarah!.!.!.and begins to master the magical equations !.!.he unravels a horrid truth !.!.that the soul thief (ghodnofer) is captured for centuries inside a secret room inside the orphanage and now his allies will sneak into the orphanage searching for their master!.!.!.but another problem remains unsolved !.!.ghodnofer's soul equation!.!.(everyone who uses math magic has an equation that controls the current traits and state of his soul!.!.by modifying the magical equation one can loose his conscience and fall into an endless coma!.!.!.)the only one who can re modify the magical equation to awake ghodnofer is a natural math mage like noor(a natural math mage is someone who doesn't need a magnifying lens to write equations on!.!.!.!.his magical mathematical talent just goes out by writing the equation on paper or anything)!.!.now ghodnofer's allies will convince noor to help them search for ghodnofer's equation inside the orphanage and awake back theor master !.!.but will noor help them!.!.!.!.!.when he finds out the true intentions of ghodnofer


would this idea be loved!.!.!.!.!.its a five novels seriesWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Okay, I was prepared to come here and read a terrible idea and then tell you exactly how terrible it was!. This, however, could be a super cute idea!. I'm guessing you'd be reaching out to the Harry Potter crowd!. You'd have to be careful to not be a total ripoff, but I love the use of math as "magic"!. It may just get kids interested in it! I'm assuming it will be better written than your summary though, as that is a grammatical nightmare!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I personally wouldn't read it unless the math stuff was kept to a minimum!. I have enough of that in school!. lol!. And I would suggest you read Midnighters by Scott Westerfield just in case you don't bump into any of his already famous ideas!. Peace!.

Oh and I wouldn't call it series!. A series with only 5 books!? Try for saga or chronicles!.!.!.series has alot more than just 5 books!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds awesome to me!. I don't mind the math stuff, and I really don't think anyone else would either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com